Hmm... It was fun reading the novel. The world-building and characters seem to me to be good. As far as I have managed to read, I have loved it. I can only say that you did a good job :D
It's off to a ... very exciting start. The plot is easy to follow and entertaining. I will keep up to date on future chapters to see what else the plot can bring. :D
*"I can't help it.! It's so delicious!" Said the girl between chews. When she finished chewing and passing the food, she spoke "My friends told me yesterday to go play in the central square, can I go?" she addressed her parents.* Corrected. Thanks
Well, if a successor is not found, he or she will be in the position until the Master is not fit to continue holding the position, that is, if he/she reaches a very advanced age or suffers from some disease that prevent continuing with the charge. And, therefore, the position will remain empty, which could generate an imbalance of power. Although, it is also possible to select the best soldier in the army to have the post of Master in case there is no defined successor.
Well, when I translate "girl" or "boy", everything is translated as "kid" which would be a general translation for both genders. I'll change everything to "girl" to be more specific. Thanks
A head In other words, she is taller by a difference of about 16-18 centimeters
Two words: Totally amazing. The prologue was enough with that final question to get my attention on the novel. I have had mixed emotions as I read. Very few novels have made me feel this. You did a great job writing the plot of this novel :D
It's a ... interesting story. The plot of the story is very intriguing and easy for the reader to assimilate, this until the last free chapter, which was the last one I read. I'll keep reading the story to see where it goes :D
Hm. I have read several chapters from the beginning and I can say that it is a great story that is easy to follow and understand. I can only say that you did a good job :D
Interesting ... very interesting. The beginning of the prologue was enough to get my attention. Simply wonderful :D! With pleasure, I will continue reading the novel :D Erin's character catches my attention
Huh ... Well, what do we have here? Simply great! The plot of the novel caught me with the first chapters and was very entertaining. With pleasure, I will continue reading :D Good job
Huh. Interesting, very interesting. The plot has attracted me in a good way and is very intriguing. Arthur's character catches my attention and how is his way of being and how he performs his actions. I will be up to date for new chapters since I have loved the story. Nice job :D
Wow. Just WOW! I am very surprised that words do not come out to describe what I felt when I was reading this. Really it's possible to feel the suffering of the protagonist. Good job :D
This novel appeared un recommended so I said: Why not? I have read the first chapters and I found the story interesting. The nivel seems to me a very good job :D
The beginning seemed interesting to me. The way events happen feels very natural, besides that from the beginning you already describe the personalities of the characters as Bingwen Deli. I'll be waiting for a new chapter :D Well done.
The plot caught me at such a level that I was reading for a long time. I have to say that the plot is one of the best I've read and the characters seem very interesting to me. Good work author! Keep it up :D