We ask only to be reassured about the noises in the cellar and the window that should not have been open!
Hey guys! Here is your author misslonelysoul, not really shy to give her work her own review! So here, I want to say my own thoughts about the story, I actually have another two works ongoing as well which you all might already know, but this work is as special as those remaining two! This story is somewhat what I had come up with just a mere thought, and without thinking much, I headed up to write it! And as days passed, I continued it, imagining more and more, and for the first time, I actually felt glad writing this piece! I recognised my own improvement and I am literally so happy to say that this was the best of what I already wrote, and I really would wish you to give it a try! Well enough with the bluffing, don't mind, I talk too much! Coming to the story, it's a mixture of everything! Love. Hate. Contentment. Sorrow. Hurt. Healed. Hidden mysteries. Unexpected discoveries. Thrill and as well as curiosity! No more spoilers, you really need to read the chapters to find out more! Well the author is greedy! ;) Note:- At present only this piece is being updated constantly, and I am taking a break from the other two works as of now! But rest assured, this is temporary!!
Thanks for the review! It means alot! And yeah, I would so gladly consider your suggestion and will try to work on the background world too! Thanks again for the review!! : )) <3
Just started reading it and I loved it! I recommend any who is willing to read about the plot where both the female and male lead grabs your attention and makes you get interested in them! So far, character development is good, also the story ddevelopment, I liked the plot! Well narration can be a little better but it's the author's first trial so we can expect more in upcoming chapters. Overall, this story is a worth reading one!! Waiting for more updates, good luck author, keep going.
My guessing is that box had the couple ring which the male lead was searching for. I am thinking that she is the one!! Well coming to the female lead, I am quite surprised by her! I mean how many talents does she has, is very good at studies, started her own business after the downfall of her parental buisness even after suffering her parent's loss, can design with an own brand of her's, have an interest and a little knowledge at stock markets, also writes. And now is also wanting to start a company all over again. I mean isn't she multi-talented?? Author did a great imagination!! Well as I also like female leads as the MC's, I am also now interested in male lead. Good job author, keep going!! All the best!!
Perhaps you knew and you forgot already!
Excellent start! Every work from Jasmine is stunning! Already I am sticked to HOD, and still can't forget Married to the devil's son, despite its ending! And here comes the next one, no need to wonder, this will haunt me like the remaining stories too!! Keep going Jasmine! Lots of love 💕
It's a little of confusion as I am not able to know who is saying what! If you add words after the dialogues like Cian said or questioned or replied or something else suiting the situation, then it can help readers to understand a little more! Nothing much than this according to me!
Thanks for letting me know the mistake my friend! I changed it! Thank you! 😊