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To start, it's a story to read while you're bored and don't have anything else to read. The mc obtains powers that separate him from normal levels, destroying kurama full power, but... they are wasted, there are no changes in the story and the mc is just an addition without weight or importance, the mc is nerfed for no reason that justifies it and not to mention his personality, he is not a villain, he is not a hero, his personality changes by chapters which makes the mc boring. If the MC died and was replaced by another, the story would not change. 59 chapters and we have a boring super op mc who gets nerfed in important moments... so much lost potential
well, this was enough, it almost seems like the mc is getting weaker and weaker with these nerfs. which was the purpose of showing off in front of everyone and giving it so much power if you are going to follow the canon without modifications that differentiate it from the original. This was disappointing
Do MC's powers nerf the intelligence of others? The MC is only 10 years old and is threatening Stark, and showing impossible skills for his age in front of so many witnesses, someone with normal intelligence would try to put him in formaldehyde waiting for a dissection... but he's lucky everyone around him becomes stupid or something like that
"Gordon"
It's simply terrible, this ff has no substance, the mc goes from deciding to do nothing to playing the low-budget villain to playing as a hero in 3 episodes. There is no future goal and it feels improvised. Read it at your own risk, the MC is not a hero, nor a villain nor an antihero, just the indecisive excuse of an author who wanted to make a superman and only becomes a parody of Homelander
I'm not bad about being reserved... but at this rate, will Mc do anything? Or he would just complain, I only see powers and powers for the Mc without a use that can justify them
god we return to the same problem of nerfing the mc to your own liking to force the plot to advance, literally 4 chapters ago he stopped time at will, he literally stopped time to defeat 4 heroes and now a missile beats him in speed .. .. I wouldn't be surprised if in a fight you nerf him by hitting his little finger.....
I like the old model when it comes to songs, with the old style I connected more easily, but with the new style when writing songs I only paid attention to the first few verses and after that I just ignored the song. This new way of writing the song stops actively involving the characters and becomes environmental music and only filler to increase the number of words
I think this was not necessary, it is more unnecessary if what you wanted was to give him a reason for the mc to hate someone