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Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
"No I think I am done here for the day. Thank you Iron Tooth." May as well try out that other common fanfiction idea "May your Gold ever flow" - luis52241yrCommented
Bruh. First of all, didn't he reincarnate/transmigrate??? Why is he acting like a child?? Secondly, he was adopted and it seems his adoptive parents cared a lot about him. So why is he acting like an orphan who never knew love???? Thirdly, he knows they are fictional characters from a story he read or movie he watched so his reaction should be more of surprise or admiration for the character of Lily. Finally, is no one around him (his guardian especially) going to question how he even knew all of these things???? Bro just literally received a Hogwarts letter (which shouldn't be possible as he was in japan, and if Kuoh was any indication, then he was also in the territory of Devils from Dxd which should have some magic protection) and then he suddenly knew where exactly to go and what to say to the Goblins to get what he wanted. Like bruh, at least have a staff member visit him and guide him first (which would make sense if he was Harry Potter's twin as I doubt Dumbledore would leave such a variable out of his sight/control). It's not like the book/movie of HP showed where the Leaky Cauldron is on the map (only its general area).
Tears dripped down from my eyes as a question often thought of by my younger self here was answered. I truly was loved by my mother and father. - luis52241yrCommented
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The wind hit her body making her clothes sway, her hair that had grown during these months danced. - luis52241yrCommented
After* class
''Mr. Davies, as head of Ravenclaw it's my job to help my students, so if you need anything, remember to let me know.'' He said cheerfully. class, you can look for me in my room.'' - luis52241yrCommented
Grindewald: Excuse me?
A wizard, no matter how strong, could not expend all of his magical power to raise a single incendium spell to a level that could burn a city to the ground. - luis52241yrPosted
MC just gives away all of his DnD magic away for free. Events just happening randomly without any background reasoning. No background given for the MC and things just go smoothly without any transition whatsoever. He gets to HP world as a squib that was kicked out of family -> suddenly goes to Gringotts to get that family's inheritance (with no indication of how he knew that all members of that family died all of a sudden) -> turns out he is related to Rose Potter (a genderbent Harry Potter) -> suddenly becomes the lord of a town with all people reverently following his every word -> meets Rose (after sending her a letter about their distant relationship) and decides to teach her a Dnd spell for no reason -> Durselys conveniently kick Rose Potter out after she had met him leaving no choice for but for her to reside with him -> lets Hermione (who came to see Rose) go through all of his family's ancient family magic -> starts teaching Rose and Hermione Dnd spells and has them fight Dnd creatures... This story had a lot of potential but was ruined by lack of world building and bad choices made by the author!
- luis52241yrCommentedCh 10 Ch-9
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Really... A request... No contract or anything.... Cause its not like he could make himself rich beyond imagination using this breakthrough.... Dumb*ss..
With my first magic item test concluded I sent Alan home with his money for his time and a request to not speak of the experiments till we have a stabilizer built. - luis52241yrCommented
Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Giving away his family magic to random people..... Really??
Our last stop in the library where I expected Hermione to spend most of her time here as it hold the entirely of the Armstrong Library which hold times from production magic to enchanting. - luis52241yrCommented
Bruh. I'm pretty sure some muggle kid would have long ago exposed magic with a camera if that was the case!
Dan-"Yes I do spend most of my time in the mundane world so my home works fine around magic and so should any magical home as who ever told you magic and technology doesn't work has been lying to you. - luis52241yrCommented
Bro. Just leave it at 11 and just wait till they graduate. There would only be like a 7-year age difference which is not that big a deal, especially for wizards who live longer!
But their will be younger girls involved like Luna as she is best Girl, but Hogwarts starts at 13 instead of 11 to make it a little less creepy, Also she will be in the same year as Rose. - luis52241yrCommented
Bruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
So one Rose will not be a Harem member as she will be a little sister figure and I see her as someone who has gone through a lot. - luis52241yrCommented
Why teach her that???? He would just be essentially giving Dumbledore, Voldemort, and Snape free magic!
We would spend way longer than we meant to in the park as before we realized it was nearing sundown. During that I walked her through the basics of HP-magic from the Renaissance, and the beings of DND magic. - luis52241yrCommentedCh 16 Peace at last
- luis52241yrCommentedThe rest of the long-term projects, including the sustenance one that Toedscruel was participating in, were being carried out with Toedscool. By now Toedscool's little harem could no longer be called as such since the number of females in it had exceeded 60.
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She down bad!
'No, I can't let him continue like this! I'll have to supervise him more!' - luis52241yrCommented
Or maybe it does...
Still, those had nothing to do with Ibara or Mineta.