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Alan_Garcia_3344

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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    antiacademic?

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    *she

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    The rise of the pervert primordial
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    Nice

    Ch 50 The admission exam (Part 1)
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
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    *Aura

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    *clashed

    Daimon saw the result which was a crack in the target, Elizabeth changed the target to a new one and then returned to her previous spot before shooting again, the difference was that this time instead of just a bullet… a line of fire left the cannon of the gun and the result was completely different also, the target was completely destroyed and the line of fire kept moving until it clashes against the wall of the room.
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    *it's important

    "In the future, you are going to lead all of us, so important for you to have a good criterion, focus on the little details and take the best decision for the situation you might find in… of course you can't make some exceptions like choosing your big sister Elaine to take the main spot to hug you to sleep on weekends ♥".
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    *fact

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    two*

    They started kissing again, while their tongues were fighting for supremacy, Aster undid the laces on her bra and removed it with his hands, he immediately felt to little soft pointy things pressing against his chest.
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    *him

    Aster was also evaluating the man in front of him, he had brown hair, his eye color was blue similar to Kana's one, he had beard and mustache, he was wearing pretty standard clothes, maybe because this was his house but what caught his attention was the little scars that were on the left side of his face, one on top of his eyebrow and another one over his upper lip, the aura around hum was the one of a upright and brave ruler.
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    weird*

    "Sorry I didn't want to say weir things, she is still with us, it's just that she can't move too much due to her frail health but she lives in the place where we will be staying, to be far from the stressful atmosphere of the capital".
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    instead of "a" it should be "I"

    "I also love this city, my mom used to take me here at least once a week when a was younger, unlike the capital city people here are gentle and easy to get along".
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    wolf girl = good girl

    Daimon couldn't help but steal a couple of glances at Aura which she immediately noticed; her tail unconsciously waggled a bit.
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    I kinda really like the part of Aura moving her tail for some reason

    Ch 43 Show of talents
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    *Daimon

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    tks for the chapter

    Ch 35 Aura’s observations
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    I guess you are missing "core", I remember that it went to sleep once before

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    missing word bro

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    lol, she is the best

    "She is in the bag, ladies and gentlemen", she shouted in Daimon's mind.
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    "appear in front of it"

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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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  • Alan_Garcia_3344
    Alan_Garcia_33441yr
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    If I understood something from the other novel is that the author likes to add girls and then develop their relatonship after which I like btw, still I will suggest you to try the other way around with the next one maybe it will become a thing and it's always better to have a little of many things to make the story better

    Ch 33 Curiosity killed the cat
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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