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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino2mth
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    F Akira Toriyama 馃槶馃槶馃槶馃槶馃槶馃槶.

    Ch 8 :(
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino2mth
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    Wait a minute, seriously, this son of a bitch has everything to be broken but is a complete piece of shit, or do you have shit in your head? If the protagonist is a monster then make him an imbecile monster, seriously he has complete knowledge of what is going to happen and instead of training like crazy he just goesof off, no matter how good this story is this is a shitty hole in a script, Damn, it's going to be that frustrating in the house of the bitch who gave birth to you, I agree with the others who complained about this story.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
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    Why don't you make a protagonist son of Zeus and legacy of Poseidon, besides making him very powerful it would still be consistent with the title, it's difficult to find Percy Jackson stories with a son of Zeus, Poseidon and Hades are outdated, make one crossover with Harry Potter and DxD, the story of Percy Jackson can take place at the same time as Harry Potter or take place later, like at the age of twelve the protagonist goes to Horwguats and he goes until he is fifteen when the story of Percy Jackson and the lightning thief, from then on you vary between both, at nineteen you finish percy jackson and start dxd together with the heroes of Olympus, it's just an idea.

    Ch 4 Announcement
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    Son of poseidon monarch of Quakes, Ice and Domination
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino3mth
    Commented

    Nice man,nice.

    Ch 30 Fighting , Eating, *******
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino3mth
    Replied to God_of_Perverts

    In the planetarium of worlds is where the multiverse is located, but not just one but infinite multiverses, in other words a cluster of multiverses, the new 52 are just the main multiverses, each universe is infinite in size and has infinite superior dimensions, above the planetarium of worlds there is the bloodletting that is the essence of the entire multiverse above that there is the sphere of the gods which is not a dimension but a layer of reality, the fourth layer to be precise, and it is where Zeus and other gods live, I must say that the sphere of the gods is immeasurable in size, and that Zeus lives in skyland, where he has infinite superior heavens and each heaven sees the previous one as a dream and Zeus is on the superior scale of the gods of the heavens, after all he is part of the quintessence.

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    I Am Apollo, The Blinding Light, And The Incandescent Sun
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino3mth
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    Well, Typhon is the father of monsters, the number of children he had was immense, and you can play God of War and transform them into a race like minotaurs, ogres, goblins, trolls, slimis, dragons, among others. , and even ghouls, vampires, werewolves, there are so many possibilities, you can put monsters from other worlds like chimera ants, you can do solo leving like all those monsters and dungeons, have imagination.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino3mth
    Replied to Shadow_D_Monarch3

    Personally, I would prefer Zeus, stories about the sons of Hades are very common in the Percy Jackson fandom, Zeus not so much, and I recommend that you mix this story, because Percy Jackson, just Percy Jackson, doesn't stand alone when it comes to a long story, you can combine it with dxd, shinmai maou no testament or anything else that could give greater possibilities, or do something so original that it looks different, but I admit, son of Medea, this was brilliant.

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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino3mth
    Replied to Gof_Uckurself

    This is called paranoia, he already abandoned a fic with the same theme, reincarnated as Zeus and everything, but only 7 chapters in and it was abandoned.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino3mth
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    The only mistake in this story is not having dialogues, not much interaction between the gods, I don't know, it seems like I'm watching a story without much character depth, if you knew how to make the most of it you would have used the ten years of war in the story, it was too quick , one moment Hades is having an internal monologue then boom, war, and the transition isn't the best, we don't know if Hades is simply explaining something that he knows about the war or is simply actually in the war, you only understand later.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
    Replied to ExtraZ7

    Chiron seems more Apollo to me than Apollo himself hahaha, if they are lookalikes, that would be something interesting.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 - 螡蔚渭苇伪
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    I Am Apollo, The Blinding Light, And The Incandescent Sun
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
    Replied to ExtraZ7

    Apollo was the god of male beauty, but in general I didn't see anything masculine, he seems to me like a generic Murin protagonist, but even the Murin characters have noticeable muscles due to their intense training, Apollo seems a bit effeminate in terms of appearance, then he puts some muscles on him to give the idea of 鈥嬧媋 Greek god.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 - 螡蔚渭苇伪
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
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    Will this even continue? Morally, it's a shame to wait a century for an update. Dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
    Replied to Vilbrax

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    Ch 24 Chapter 24 - Goddess of the Forge
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
    Posted

    This is a simple story but a good premise, the divine division being a gauntlet doesn't change anything in fact it gets much better, I haven't finished it yet but I trust this story.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
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    Bro, in Saint Seiya there is a better represented Athena, that image you posted is obviously Artemis, that bow and arrow has nothing to do with Athena, the wonder woman with her panties full of stars looking like a strip club dancer is more Athena from doque to artemis from dungeon ni deai.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 - The 13 Olympians
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
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    Well, where do I start, the story has potential, the premise is good but poorly executed, the idea was a different, badass Luffy with a different Devil Fruit and he delivers, but Luffy isn't as badass as he thinks he is, his mythical zoan is fucking boring, no joke, a giant fire-breathing animal, if it were kaido's fruit, maybe it would be more interesting, he uses ifrit, a fire jinn from final fantasy as an akuma no mi, the excuse is that the new Luffy would be unable to awaken Hito Hito no Mi Nika, but there could have been several fruits that could have been substituted, but using a fire demon was the worst choice, as I said it could have been a dragon, Luffy has a monstrous physique like Kaido or a white beard. However, he is just a little above average, Luffy after the two-year time jump would clean the floor with him easily, he has a system where he can take EVERYTHING Luffy wants but it only serves to be convenient for the author as he is incapable of writing a story good enough to get something that the characters want or need, he could buy super soldier serums increased by a hundred times or something to increase the potential of everyone in the crew but as I said the system only serves to be convenient for the author and I personally hate it system, the story is drawn out and sometimes not at all fun, Luffy is provoking God and the world but if they send an admiral he is super fucked and he knows it but he prefers to be an idiot than the genius he thinks he is, and of course the author loves yamato a lot because no matter what luffy does he will never get over it, in general everyone is useless including luffy in comparison to yamato, and the funniest thing is that if yamato was just a little more intelligent and not submissive to yamato luffy she became the captain's damn thing, she's not just strong she's the strongest of the bunch, the author is too lazy to write his own story because instead of starting from childhood and developing from there, he doesn't start from where the story began in the barrel, and certain events become VERY strange and boring when this happens, if he started from Luffy's childhood he would have more than enough time to develop in terms of power and relate to the crew but the author wasn't into it, but well that's it my review.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino4mth
    Commented

    H茅cate

    Ch 3 AN/Vote:
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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino5mth
    Replied to David_555

    Lovecraft's myths do not have a multiverse because this term did not even exist yet, it only came with the creation of marvel comics and dc comics, outversal means literally outside the verse, anything that is outside the standard reality, that is, ours, is literally outversal, the sphere of the gods or fourth layer of reality transcends everything the verse below, like planetary of worlds and the bleed, it's no different than a reader reading a story, you just have a very limited mind for this term we call outversal, to be honest there are many stories with this level of power, for example marvel, persona, shimegami tensei and many others, and just one more thing, Lovecraft's world has 9 higher dimensions, the last being the silver key gates, which is where azathoth sleeps, dc. comics have infinite.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino5mth
    Replied to David_555

    You're only taking the multiverse into consideration, don't forget the infinite dimensions that exist in DC, but I'll give you a summary. In DC, there are 52 known realities, each reality being an infinite multiverse, they are located in the planetarium of worlds, you may have already seen the map, but the important thing to highlight is in the planetarium there is bleed, I think that's how they say it, in bleed there are infinite dimensions of infinite size that transcend space-time, and one of the things that exists in bleed is the green and parliament of trees, responsible for all flora in existence, every world, every reality, not counting red, yellow, gray and many others that follow in this direction, and there is something called the sphere of the gods or fourth dimension, which no, it is not a spatial or dimensional dimension but a layer of reality that transcends everything I said previously including bleed, zeus da dc exists in the sphere of the gods and not only that, he is a member of the quintessence which is basically a parliament made up of beings like hightfather and specter, so zeus has the same level of power as them, second only to darksider who can kill all members of the quintessence with one attack , beings from the fifth dimension and beings from the sixth dimension as the hands of the source, so analyzing Zeus is at least outversal.

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  • Lukas_Laurentino
    Lukas_Laurentino5mth
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    Dude, this is supposed to be fun, nothing more, you can start the story over again, and make mixes, like combining Percy Jackson with DC comics, I think making mixes gives a wider range to work with and infinite possibilities.

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