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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer7mth
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    the story is good but it has a lot of filler The problem isn't even the filler, because I like calm chapters with a little slice of life. but the author delays the development of the story a lot. the name of the book and lineage, but it took 200 chapters to release the lineage, a lot of delay, it took a lot of time. Another problem is that every time someone strong realizes that there is something inside their heart that will kill them, but everyone says they can't help. that's a lot of bullshit, even a dragon that must be thousands of times stronger than the person who put the thing in the mc, said he couldn't help him, I know it was a fragment of his consciousness, but it's still a lot of bullshit the dragon in be able to help. and even if they can't help they should warn the mc, but neither the man in the tower nor the dragon warned him, just the thing in his heart, that's ridiculous. Mystery is good, but that's what the author does is just mess around, pretending to be a mystery. What's the point of hiding this from MC? It doesn't make any sense for the man or the dragon not to tell him

    Celestial Bloodline
    Fantasy · _Orange_
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Posted

    This story was always very good, for a while it was my favorite. But she always had a very annoying problem, every arch has some traitor that is annoying, boring and boring, not even the bad emperors don't have so many traitors, I know there are greedy people, but it's ridiculous to have no end to it. The contracts part is the dumbest, if the contract can see traitors but he always only checks after shit and someone cheats, every time and that, he cares so much about making contracts every time but you don't check them, oh when something goes wrong he'll check to see if there's any left that's too stupid. He has a super AI that he's supposed to check his contracts every day, what's the point of always making contracts if they don't get checked? and the same thing always happens to traitors. The second problem is women , but it seems that the author has realized his mistake in this part and wants to solve it a little. MC takes women as if they were pokemon but they don't appear anymore they look like they were abandoned, I don't want them to appear sometimes for a cane +18 and then disappear. most of the women had a good story but were thrown aside, and the first wife was incredible but we hardly ever see it, there can be the excuse that they don't show up because when he leaves they stay to take care of the empire, but even with them taking care of from the empire appears the traitors every time. It started to get exaggerated when he took the mother who had a daughter I thought it was very sudden out of nowhere, but it was still good because she had an interesting story and the daughter was cute but she also disappeared, another one for the list, but what disappointed me was him taking the elf who was his subordinate's wife that was ridiculous. I can only say that I am sad with the direction of the novel, it was very good, it was my favorite for a long time, I hope it gets better. sorry if something is spelled wrong I used google translator

    Armipotent
    Fantasy · HotIce
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Replied to pinaka_

    Okay, but that's what I said, if it's not time to reveal it, that's okay, but why keep putting information before the time but erased, if it's not time yet and just don't talk about it. Putting @&*#%@#$% cuts all the immersion of the story, and better not to put anything, if it's not time and just don't talk about it putting @&*#%@#$%

    Ch 645 Return(End)
    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Replied to pinaka_

    an example the third most powerful race he finds in the heritage of one of the 10 emperors. That led me to make this comment, but you've already done this several times, you keep erasing the text, to hide something that the MC is seeing or saying that doesn't make sense, we are following what the mc sees, this is not a mystery, this and just doing something silly that interferes with the reading experience because every time some text of something you see or say is hidden from the reader only. Mystery is something the mc doesn't know, just like his past, that's good. but hiding text from something he is seeing, talking, interacting with, doesn't make sense. Reading a book is like watching a movie, and as if you were the character but in the third person, what's the point of hiding it from the reader, it only ruins the experience because every time there's a scribbled text, erased hiding something that wasn't even supposed to be hidden.

    Ch 645 Return(End)
    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Posted

    Author I'm sorry to say this, but you are an asshole. Mystery is very good in stories, but in yours it's shit, because you hide things from the reader that mc already knows, that doesn't make sense. the mystery of the past and the system is good, but the rest is stupid, stupid, imbecile, I've read dozens of books, you're the first one I have to curse, because that's not possible, you keep erasing text to hide things from the reader that the mc already knows, this is not a mystery and you are just hiding information that was supposed to be known. if you don't want to talk yet, don't even write anything about it, why talk by writing things erasing the text only generates hate for doing shit.

    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Posted

    I was really enjoying it a lot, I would give it 4.8/5. Even the training part is boring. the part of the store, the virtual world, the customers is very pleasant. But my opinion changed after chapter 419 and information I heard from chapter 500. But there's one thing, when you create a mystery you have to give an answer, it's okay to take time. But don't pretend you're going to give an answer, to deceive the reader and not answer anything. It's okay that the mc's past is a mystery and everything related to the system, but you put him on a mission that lasted more than 250 chapters, so when he has the answer, why are they trying to attack your store, you just don't answer causing the enemy to self-destruct. Another disheartening thing is putting these voices from the higher dimension, talking and laughing about the MC. You create an mc who appears to be superior with a system that is not afraid of anything below the Devas and is now full of superior beings laughing and treating the MC like a toy. I thought mc would be a reincarnation of some great being or his son, but actually he and someone being used, that's disappointing.

    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
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    This one is very good, I give it 5 stars, it has its problems but I recommend it to everyone. PROS: * Mc gets OP very fast and keeps getting More OP very good * The story is very interesting and holds you to read more. CONS: * The power system is very confusing and poorly explained, especially the magic system. an ex of that is that the awakening class is at level 10, but there are 3 secret levels, so the maximum level before awakening is 13. equals your bodily power is level 13. But the magician he levels more than 20 times before awakening and reaches the level 3 mythical mage, which should be level 13 mythical equal to corporal level 13 mythical. * It's not a cons in itself, but a fear of the author dropping the book as he has already dropped two other books, the author is great, but he's afraid of doing it again. But the story is very good, I recommend it.

    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Replied to Kit_0685

    i think mc is the reincarnation of god or ninam is son of god and mc is the reincarnation of ninam

    Ch 280 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-2)
    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Replied to Crimson_ink

    if the pond contains a drop of the blood of a true being, was it not more to his advantage to absorb that blood to refine his body above lord rank?

    Ch 279 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-1)
    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Commented

    a little discouraging this shadow, what's the use of having a shadow that takes half of your strength, it doesn't make sense to take it from your body to do missions for him, since he'll get weaker. The option to revive is also useless, if he dies with the shadow on his body when he comes back to life the enemy will kill the shadow. the ideal was to not power the shadow and keep it in a hiding place as a backup life, but without losing the magic. I see this ability as a nerf. and the shadow is extremely weak if it dies out of body it can still lose its mythic magic.

    Ch 215 Singing the First Song!
    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Commented

    I have read another book by the author, very good. This one is quite nice. however this separation of levels is confusing. the mc is on the 13th level of the first realm, something not seen in 700 years. but a level 15 monster appears. I understand that this monster would be level 5 of the 2nd realm. but it is not clear and makes it confusing. I understand that monster only has level and not realm of cultivation. but there has to be a separation like humans. The amount of hp of the monster is also very exaggerated, mc only has 10hp, but the monster has 500hp, even if it is lvl5 from a higher realm, and a very big difference. the mc's stats were supposed to be superior to the enemies by being mastered to the maximum because of the system, but the wolves had super high stats too.

    Ch 42 Darklin, The Gremlin!
    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Replied to Crimson_ink

    please come back, it was an amazing novel

    Ch 279 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-1)
    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Commented

    @Crimson_ink Awakened: Evolving to Godhood, has it been dropped forever?

    Ch 279 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-1)
    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer1yr
    Posted

    Did you Drop Awakened: Evolving to Godhood to write this novel? It was a very good book, and sad to be dropped. It was at the best part when he was starting to get real strong

    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer2yr
    Replied to qdog233

    yes it is indeed a very original story, but the author breaks all originality by referring to everything that exists in our pop culture, and everything is copied. break all immersion

    Ch 336 The New Order
    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer2yr
    Posted

    The story is good, it has potential and very interesting, but the author totally shits on the good story. 1- it's annoying, boring and very unnecessary the author several times per chapter is referring to pop culture, everything from movies, manga, anime and other novels, this is extremely irritating and annoying. 2- In addition to the reference, he keeps putting notes explaining the references. 3- the author loves to make the mc be shocked by how much he is OP, that's too much cringe, but it wasn't enough for him to keep shouting to himself how much is OP, in fact he's not OP because he almost died several times and I still haven't reached chapter 200 and it will definitely continue to happen. 4- The author loves to say that the MC is smart, but he makes mistakes several times, then the author says that it's only arc 1 and in arc 2 he gets smarter. But in arc two he continues to do stupid things and gloat like he's smart. The attitudes he takes for his store are stupid, he knew he would make many giant enemies, the support of the vampire clan one of the 3 factions that controls the empire is useless, it looks like garbage, simple entrepreneurs of a single sector of 80 sectors from the city goes against his store that is a partner of the vampires, but so far, the problem is how he deals with it, he is stupid to the point of threatening all the rich merchants and robbing them and not expecting retribution, seriously with the intelligence the author says he has did he not expect retaliation? If he didn't want to kill them so as not to cause trouble by killing people openly should he kill them afterwards, he is an assassin and has an assassin subordinate, but doesn't he just cause enemies and not expect retribution? Then he gets angry when they start killing his employees, all this happens because he is stupid and takes stupid actions. 5- He loves to criticize other cliché novels, but he says that his protagonist is an anti-hero, but he loves to do cliché hero things In short, the story is good, it has potential, I'll give it 5 stars, but it's annoying pop culture references and notes explaining them, the author breaks the immersion in reading. And the MC only takes dumb attitudes, disappointing in this regard, he should be trying to get strong by killing semi-saint beings, but it's ok for him to want to play merchant, but at least take smart attitudes, he looks stupid. Sorry if something is spelled wrong English is not my language.

    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer2yr
    Posted

    The story is good overall, but it has a lot of annoying or pointless things. 1-mc being a dog of the underworld and he could ask his father-in-law for help. 2-father-in-law being the government's dog and letting his family fuck themselves, when he could destroy the government. 3-Every fight the mc is broken because of the technique that makes the body stronger and smoke comes out, but after that it becomes a useless malnourished, this technique is idiotic, it's not worth using it to have a lot of power for a few minutes and then stay a trash. 4- One of the most annoying things, mc takes action for one reason and the next is doing something opposite. Ex: chapter +-399, MC returns hidden to his country because the government of the CONTINENT is after him girlfriend and mother-in-law. first he leaves his brother-in-law behind saying he's safe, and of course he's not safe, the government sent people to kill him and his mother-in-law why not have the other one killed who is in like. then he returns hidden on the flight, takes clandestine tickets ok, covers his face ok, but everyone at the airport observes the rest of his girlfriend and mother-in-law congratulations for the description, and now in his country the friend says that people were excited about his return to his country, and MC still says he wants to go to his school, he was supposed to hide in a fucking hole, or go to another continent or stay on the grandmaster's island. but isn't he exposed because in his country there are only weak people, but won't the fucking continent government send someone strong after him? and ridiculous why hide if it's going to reveal itself soon after? half the world wants to kill him and whoever is close to him, instead of taking everyone important to him and fleeing to another continent he only goes to his family so that everyone is in more danger.

    Martial Arts System
    Action · Alekzi
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer2yr
    Commented

    so this goddess he invoked from the records of the universe, and a copy of the true goddess that was in the records? Or is it the living goddess herself? or her after death?

    Ch 232 Origin Flux
    The Harvester
    Fantasy · AhraManyu
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer2yr
    Posted

    chapter 100 is totally idiotic to be pointless. if he didn't know she was going to merge with him which was a good thing, his initial idea was actually to destroy a rank C body to turn it into an F rank mana body. Seriously, he was going to lose his biggest asset that would become useless, and he would still spend twice as much mana as is currently not enough. really idiot. luckily it happened differently. but really a dumb attitude.

    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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  • MaouMafer
    MaouMafer2yr
    Posted

    started now, read 20 chapters so far and will continue. But the author writes many explanations or dialogues with a lot of redundancy. dialogues full of flourishes that are repeated in the same chapter for something that could be much shorter. it's a bit of a drag and tiring reading, not because the pace is slow, that's not a problem, but because of too much redundancy.

    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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