Review Detail of MaouMafer in Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Review detail


started now, read 20 chapters so far and will continue. But the author writes many explanations or dialogues with a lot of redundancy. dialogues full of flourishes that are repeated in the same chapter for something that could be much shorter. it's a bit of a drag and tiring reading, not because the pace is slow, that's not a problem, but because of too much redundancy.

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil


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