Review Detail of MaouMafer in The First Store System

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Author I'm sorry to say this, but you are an asshole. Mystery is very good in stories, but in yours it's shit, because you hide things from the reader that mc already knows, that doesn't make sense. the mystery of the past and the system is good, but the rest is stupid, stupid, imbecile, I've read dozens of books, you're the first one I have to curse, because that's not possible, you keep erasing text to hide things from the reader that the mc already knows, this is not a mystery and you are just hiding information that was supposed to be known. if you don't want to talk yet, don't even write anything about it, why talk by writing things erasing the text only generates hate for doing shit.

The First Store System


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