bs nanites are fone. can make him techno jesus if you want. im kinda looking forward to it.

thats fair. lucy does feel like an accessory at the moment. perhaps her big special date will fix that.

when does he make his own sandevistan? pretty sure he has had the plans for it since chapter one.

no.

really dont think he needs more women. ots tough to give character and interactions to the ones already there.

so his ability is full control of the nanites from any range? if so he could make full on clones of himself easily. perfect for doing SCIENCE!

the next customer. its important to move forward with this premise.

you know Im hoping this goes the way 9f traffords trading club. woule be interesting.

the story has a minor problem in point of view changing randomly from third person to first perspn and back again. suggest continuity here by making it all one pov.

hrm. can honestly say this would be better if he actually experienced the simulations rather than just read text.

less than one adult. afterall a brain has millions of neuron cells. the cast is only a few dozen characters.

true that. they need to approach at an angle rather than direct if they want to keep themselves as they are rather than assimilate into the origin. ergo why its so tough to reach root as you either lose yourself before you get there or you get there after extreme amounts of time or pure luck.

smart keeping backup copies on your computer. its a pain to rewrite stuff thats lost.

A fantastic read. By the end I was very invested but I also was content with it.

the ending of a tale is a tragic moment, as I lose one story but gain the ending. the journey was fun and so was the destination.

lol the name doesnt bode well.

laughs in Superman.

Honestly was a fun read. And sometimes thats all I really want. Thanks for the entertaining story. The adventure throughout various places from many chapters to one or two each was fun.