Reviews of Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

I love the story within a story concept. This is a very emotional tale, I'm so excited to see how it develops. It looks like there's been a lot of groundwork developed in the first several chapters for a lot of interesting plots to come. I've added it to my library and I'm keeping an eye on it!

Such a good start! And the writing style really delivers the feelings. I don't really read this kind of stories but this one is really nice.

This is actually quite good for your first novel. The story has a very solid plot and the storyline is very interesting even though it's a bit common. I admire how unique you made it. However, the story lacks a proper flow, especially at the beginning but as the chapters progress the flow improves. The synopsis and the first chapter greatly confused me, I literally had no idea what was going on at the beginning of chapter 1. The novel is also unfortunately plagued by grammatical and punctuation errors that made my understanding of the novel even harder. There were multiple run-on sentences and improper uses of full stops and commas. Overall, the novel has a very good plot and the intentions of the writer were clear but the errors and the flow makes it very confusing. This was my honest review, I hope that as you write you can only get better and better. [img=recommend]

Based on the few chapters I’ve read, I’m eager to see where this story is headed! I really enjoy the scenes with Ashton and the loving sibling relationship he shares with his sister. There was also one line from the main character that I thought was especially funny 🤣🤣. I enjoy Irene’s narration very much.

A beautiful cover page! The picture is so sweet! The main idea for the plot sounds very ordinary, but... the plot is intriguing. The characters are interesting. From the very beginning of the story you try to describe the background world. Well done!

Amazing story line, I was drawn into this novel right away from the start. I can see, This novel has great potential ahead. Keep up the great work !! Upload more chapters.

Needs some fixes with the grammars but is readable. Though, it ruins the flow, making the readers couldn't read any longer. The story itself is also common, which makes the story hard to write, and with all the said problems, I say it wouldn't stand a chance on this platform but if you fix those problems. Your book will be good to go.

Overall : the story’s plot line was greatly unique and the synopsis was attractive enough to catch my attention! The story was fresh and the author managed to show their creativeness into the story! Writing quality : the writing style was great and seems like it is also written in a first person perspective! There were some grammatical errors here and there but it didn’t affect the reading, so it’s fine~ Updating : the updates are stable and it seems like the author is keeping an update daily which is good~! Characters : there were descriptions about the characters features, making them distinctive and they were well written out! From what it seems like, the characters in the story have their own set of personalities that they uphold which makes the story even more interesting! There was also characters background written in there which made me understand the story more, it is good! World background : the world was fine, it was set in the royalty reincarnation theme and it was also written according to it too! There wasn’t much world background(?) but there were some details here and there describing the things and events happening so it’s all good~ My thoughts : this was a great read! I did take my time but I’m glad I got to read this story!! The story itself intrigued me to continue on, reading and I loved it a lot! The author seems like they know where they want to develop and bring their story to, I hope to see more of this, you can do it Author and good job~ ✨✨

Wow... the storyline just improved at a tremendous speed. The story is great and I would love to read more. The comedy, as well as the emotional scenes, were well written. The story has prospects. keep it up and write more, I can't help myself from adding this to my library.

I like the concept and how the author write it, the story itself is already intriguing so is the characters. A little flaw but I'm sure that can be fixed by proofreading.

The main heroine is transmigrated into her favorite romance novel, where she is a daughter of a noble family and must take care of her younger brother. In her real life, her family's history was rather tragic, and she tries to prevent such tragedy from happening again. Unwillingly, she gets entangled in the romantic shenanigans of the novel's protagonists... The story is quite nice, especially when it comes to FL's younger brother Ash and her care for him. The overall feel is just like in popular anime with similar premise, which is a big plus in my opinion! If there's one monus it's punctuation, which can be a bit chaotic. But it doesn't prevent you from enjoying the story. Still, I would suggest for the author to use a program/site like Grammarly - it never hurts. Overall, I wish the author all the best with this story! Keep writing! :)

The story has potential. It has a great flow, the idea is new, the description is good too. Overall, I have to say that it's a great piece of work! Good job, author!

It's a really good story. Great writing, excellent dialogue, relatable characters, and so on. The only thing this story could use more of imo is description of what the characters look like and the environment. I'm a visualist, so please add that then this is five stars for me.

A great novel! There's a lot of stories with similar concept but this one definitely stood out for me. The world building is amazing and I could imagine what's happening in my head while reading. The pace of the story is fine for me, not fast or slow. The characters are quite distinct too. Overall, it's a nice and recommended book~

A nice read for a while reminds me of Bakarina but of course, this story has a unique story to intake 💕 Review Proper Writing Quality. Pros. The narratives flow smoothly and are easy to read. Love the vivid description and imagery as well. Suggestions for Improvement. It might be because that the author aims to update daily well which is a good thing, but when you've got some time, I suggest checking back some of your chapters for fixing g-errors. Apps such as Grammarly or google docs words help to fix minor grammar as well. Hope this helps. Stability of Updates. I see no problem here. The author updates every day so far. Story Development. In each of the chapters, the story helps you to introduce the world from the female lead perspectives as well as know the characters much better. Everything is flowing smoothly for a while. Character Design. So far I love Irene's attitude. She's smart and kind at the same time. I also love her new family in this world. And even the other supporting characters there are all great so far with interesting qualities to look out for. World Background. Well-detailed. Overall if you enjoy a reincarnation story with a bit of slice of life I recommend this one to be read. Keep up the great work, author! Added this to my colls.💕

Honestly this is really cool and written-well. And for the first time, I never thought that I would feel bad to a character who almost died in the story, but good thing that Ash didn't. I added this to my library and I can't wait to finish it all. There are some errors but a little exiting can fix it, and if you want help download Grammarly, because it'll help you fix errors easily.

I love a good reincarnation story, and this is definitely one of them! The author creates a beautiful world and likeable characters in a story that is fun and easy to read! There are a few grammatical issues here and there, (Mostly commas are needed more) but it doesn't affect the readability of the story. Keep up the good work!

An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power! <3

The story is very decent and nice to read, I've always been a fan of reincarnated Novel so this is my cup of tea. You won't believe when blood came out of Ashton's mouth in the second chapter, it gave me goosebumps. Their bonding made me emotional. There is a very minor mistake. I know you will fix it. So best of luck.

There are some spelling errors. But overall the story is interesting. The idea is really creative and the plot is unique. I would love to see where this story goes. I've never read something like this before.