Thanks for the feedback. I'll review it.
Come to think of it I did watch the first episode. I just couldn't follow the plot so I stopped. But in love the actor. Pinocchio was a good on though. Cried at the intensity of the plot. It was beautiful to see their growth.
That one I haven't seen yet. I'll have to check it out.
Love that show. Watched it too many time to count. Legendary.
😂Wouldn't have seen that one. Should Google correct words of words that sound the same. Thanks for pointing that out.
Sorry about the error. Fixed.
This was my first story about systems. Hadn't gotten the chance to explore the genre but this really sparked my interest. The writer did a create job describing every detail without making me loose interest. This will be in my library as I follow the mc's journey.
I kept reading from the moment I opened this book. The flow was effortless and it was very easy to read. I was completely emersed into the story I found myself reading chapter after chapter. Great writting skills.
First two chapters but I already wish there were more. The language used is very romantic and sucks you into this world. You can feel every emotion conveyed perfectly and can feel the Mc's pain. Love the old English writting style. It's done effortlessly.
Thanks for the much needed feedback
The story is fast paced and descriptive all at once. The images convayed by the writer a vivid. Though there are some grammar mistakes it's still a very well planned story.
Heartwarming story with great execution. The progression of the story goes at the perfect pace. The little scenes give the story an overall grounded storyline.
Great command of the English Grammer. The flow is consistent and fliud. This story is very interesting and well thought out. I love the descriptions as well.
This a refreshing story. The character is capturing and fun to read as you follow this story. I can entirely relate to the MC and the author did a great job of taking us along for the ride.
The story progression is great so far. The two Mc dynamic is interesting and the plot is well done. Can't wait for more updates. [img=update]
The descriptions are detailed and the plot is very fliud. The quality of this work is very good. Overall a great story and storyline. The characters are also well planned out.