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Review Detail of Guiltythree in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

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The main heroine is transmigrated into her favorite romance novel, where she is a daughter of a noble family and must take care of her younger brother. In her real life, her family's history was rather tragic, and she tries to prevent such tragedy from happening again. Unwillingly, she gets entangled in the romantic shenanigans of the novel's protagonists... The story is quite nice, especially when it comes to FL's younger brother Ash and her care for him. The overall feel is just like in popular anime with similar premise, which is a big plus in my opinion! If there's one monus it's punctuation, which can be a bit chaotic. But it doesn't prevent you from enjoying the story. Still, I would suggest for the author to use a program/site like Grammarly - it never hurts. Overall, I wish the author all the best with this story! Keep writing! :)

Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

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Thanks a lot for the suggestion! I will definitely try it 😇