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Freylingo

Freylingo

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2020-03-31 JoinedGlobal
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo30d
    Posted

    Keep it up!!! I am amazed that you just popped out of nowhere and dropped a bombshell on Webnovel. Never stop the great work darling. I am rooting for you!!

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    How I Conquered the World After Starting as an F-Tier Loser
    Urban · FreylyTheAcolyte
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo11mth
    Posted

    Another hit, the story is so well written that I can't help but be drawn in. This author know what he is doing and he doesn't hide it. The story is a little slow but I trust it will speed up.

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    Lord of Notre Dame
    Fantasy · Freyly
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    My god do I love this novel. Fantasy is right up my alley but this out does anything else I've read. I hope to see great things from you author!

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    The World Ending Love
    Fantasy · Freyly
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    Like damn. I don't know what to even say. The writing quality is top notch, it creates very vivid images in your mind like a movie. The stability of updates is great also, more than one a day? I couldn't do that. I never thought I could picture such gruesome scenes in my head of what happened. Its true people really don't understand what people have to deal with on that kind of terrain. Its not excitement but fear. An anxiety that is instilled in your bones and lasts for many years after. I think this story has great potential!

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    {{{DROPPPED}}}
    Fantasy · Sir_Killington
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    Writing this as of Chapter 19 being published. The beginning of the story isn't going to be grand, it's the main character learning and mastering some spells. After the a few more chapters is where things start to get spicy. Blood, competition, love, criminals, power. Everything you could hope in a book starts a little later. I just wanted to establish the main character and make him be able to stand on the same stage as the power houses.

    altalt
    wfgsh
    Fantasy · Freylingo
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    Missing the speech thing

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    {{{DROPPPED}}}
    Fantasy · Sir_Killington
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    The first chapter gives us all the information we need to understand the story. This year especially I have been more into this genre of story so I quite enjoyed being set up for what is to come. While the writing feels a little choppy, it is still of good quality and won't hinder you unless you are a big time critique. This story has potential to be really high up on the ranking and I hope the author continues to deliver wonderful chapters for us!

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    Versatile System Online
    Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    You used His face back to back

    He had an amiable smile on his face. His face had refined features with captivating dark black eyes and silky black hair, which was cut neatly. Although the young man was good-looking, his eyes seemed to have a slight coldness in them.
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    Versatile System Online
    Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    You used confirmed twice in the same paragraph, which isn't the end of the world.

    Soon, many tests later, it was confirmed that transmitting one's consciousness into other worlds was no longer possible and only the unknown world remained. After a while, it was confirmed that people could obtain systems and get stronger using them.
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    Versatile System Online
    Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    SAO vibes lol

    Humanity had suddenly cracked the code for transmitting their consciousness into a virtual world, a world many would only dream of.
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    Versatile System Online
    Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    Boy oh boy is this good. I didn't realize what it was going to be in the first half of reading it. It felt like I got upper cutted with the twist. I highly recommend you read it as you will not be disappointed!

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    Trapped Fate
    Fantasy · asdsdaasd
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    Like damn. I don't know what to even say. The writing quality is top notch, it creates very vivid images in your mind like a movie. The stability of updates is great also, more than one a day? I couldn't do that. I never thought I could picture such gruesome scenes in my head of what happened. Its true people really don't understand what people have to deal with on that kind of terrain. Its not excitement but fear. An anxiety that is instilled in your bones and lasts for many years after. I think this story has great potential!

    altalt
    {{{DROPPPED}}}
    Fantasy · Sir_Killington
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    Baddass female lead? Hell yeah. This is exactly what the people need and you have delivered! Small mistakes here and there but nothing that takes away from the story. I would definitely say its worth the read!

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    Pericolosa
    Urban · staronasilentnight
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    Boy is this the story for you. It has not only what we want but what we need. Secrecy, sub-races, a new world never to be seen again....and most importantly, a MC who will do whatever he can to rise to the top! I recommend this to everyone!

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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    I loved the first chapter, it reminded me a lot of SAO. Honestly I missed reading something as refreshing as this. If you are looking for a good story, this is where its at!

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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    No good points to offer at the beginning of the adventure? That means there will be something in store for that class later on in the story. Very clever you sneaky goose.

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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    Reminds me a little of SAO. A wave of nostalgia hit me lol

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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Replied to General_Kenobi_0

    That picture is actually fan art of Meliodas from Seven Deadly Sins!

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    The Vampire Cat System
    Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Posted

    The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.

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    Fourth Sky: Puppeteer
    Fantasy · Keongmas
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  • Freylingo
    Freylingo1yr
    Commented

    Interesting

    Ch 1 New Home
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    Fourth Sky: Puppeteer
    Fantasy · Keongmas
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