Review Detail of Aeipathy_02 in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

A nice read for a while reminds me of Bakarina but of course, this story has a unique story to intake 💕 Review Proper Writing Quality. Pros. The narratives flow smoothly and are easy to read. Love the vivid description and imagery as well. Suggestions for Improvement. It might be because that the author aims to update daily well which is a good thing, but when you've got some time, I suggest checking back some of your chapters for fixing g-errors. Apps such as Grammarly or google docs words help to fix minor grammar as well. Hope this helps. Stability of Updates. I see no problem here. The author updates every day so far. Story Development. In each of the chapters, the story helps you to introduce the world from the female lead perspectives as well as know the characters much better. Everything is flowing smoothly for a while. Character Design. So far I love Irene's attitude. She's smart and kind at the same time. I also love her new family in this world. And even the other supporting characters there are all great so far with interesting qualities to look out for. World Background. Well-detailed. Overall if you enjoy a reincarnation story with a bit of slice of life I recommend this one to be read. Keep up the great work, author! Added this to my colls.💕