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hiii, a novice author here~ I’ll update when I can~! ✨🦕

2021-04-23 JoinedSingapore
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the story was great, the synopsis was interesting! The story had the potential to be able to soar high! It is also very much recommended to those who would love to see a refreshing and unique story! Writing quality : the writing style was just as same as the other book and it was all fine and greatly unique! The flow/pace of the story was smooth, not too fast nor slow, making it easy for me to grip the understanding of the story better! Updating : the updates are stable and on track! Characters : the characters were described with great descriptions but it was just some bits here and there not too much. It would be good to describe all characters looks, personality and all in the story so we can get to know what they are like and it would do good for visualisation! But the conversation dialogues between the characters were interesting and it makes up for it all so it’s fine!! World background : there wasn’t much background descriptions(?) but there were some descriptions bits, here and there when describing about the things, surrounding and events that were in the story which was good enough to show the authors creativity use of great words! My thoughts : the book was such a great read! I got interested by the synopsis and wanted to know more about the book, the books contents were beyond my expectations and it was awesome! I hope to see more of both your books and wish you all the best! Good job author and keep it up!! ✨😊

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    Marrying My First Love
    Urban · Leigh_Green
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the synopsis was great, it was captivating and even more so was the story itself! Would definitely recommend it to someone who likes reading about romance! Writing quality : the writing quality was amazing and the story pace/flow was smooth, not too fast nor slow, making it understandable! Though it would maybe be good if you can make the paragraphs shorter by separating huge information into another paragraph? Well that’s just a suggestion! 😊 Updating : there are stable updates for the story! Characters : the characters were very detailed from how they look like to what they do and their personalities! The characters were beautifully well crafted out by the author with a great thoughts on what the author want them to be, look like and all! World background : the descriptions for these were well described out in words by the author! It made the scenes more imaginable with the vivid descriptions of events, surrounding and even the small minor things like the objects in the story! The author was creative about using great words to describe the surroundings! My thoughts : the story to me was amazing! Dang, it got me reading through and through till the last chapter! I really hope to see the story take flight and make great achievements! Good work author, keep it up!! ✨✨

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    Love Under The Moon Sky
    Fantasy · Leigh_Green
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the story plot was unique in a senses that they were fresh and intriguing, especially with all the superhero things going on! The book has lots of potential to soar up high from where it is now! A great book with greatness written in it! Writing quality : the writing flow was fine, not too fast nor slow and it was easy to understand! There weren’t too much mistakes seen but there were still some small minor mistakes that can be seen but don’t worry, it didn’t affect the reading so it’s fine! Updating : the updates are stable and hope to see more to come! Characters : the characters were well thought off and described! They seemed unique to me since they have their own personalities, likes and dislike, making the characters likeable. The author managed to express out the characters expression, emotions and feelings out very well! World background : the world descriptions were well written! There were various elements of things, events, world that were described beautifully with amazing choice of words! This definitely shows the authors creativity and the ability to play with words to make the world seem more realistic to the eyes! My thoughts : I found the book interesting! At first, I took a look at the synopsis and wondered what the book would likely be about and it was beyond my expectations! I was amazed by how descriptive the story was, It was a amazing book that I’ve read and I’m glad I did! Hope to see more of this and don’t stop writing! Good job author and keep up the good amazing work! ✨😊

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    Sparror Volume 1
    Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the story was interesting! the synopsis was great too, the story flow was just fine it was not too fast nor slow! I love it!! the story plot was unique and as for the storyline, It was understandable and interesting too! Writing quality : the writing was great and there wasn’t much mistakes spotted by me and the writing style was great too! Updating : I think the author is updating this book along with the other book which is good! stable updates! Characters : the characters all were greatly well written, they also have their own set of personalities that were shown in the chapters! There were also some back story on the characters of what happened to them before they moved into a new place and there were also some small descriptions on the characters! World background : the world background was great, there were description details that were telling me what the area looked like and how things proceeded on! It was detailed enough to imagine what exactly the sky and the forest looked like!! Well done! This was very well done by the author!! My thoughts : I really love the story, the book was a great read as it had attracted me from the start. I want to know more of what will happen in the kids life! I hope to see more of this story, hope you continue working on it and good job author!! ✨✨

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    Forbidden Voices
    Fantasy · Darine_ALRAMMAH
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the story’s plot line was greatly unique and the synopsis was attractive enough to catch my attention! The story was fresh and the author managed to show their creativeness into the story! Writing quality : the writing style was great and seems like it is also written in a first person perspective! There were some grammatical errors here and there but it didn’t affect the reading, so it’s fine~ Updating : the updates are stable and it seems like the author is keeping an update daily which is good~! Characters : there were descriptions about the characters features, making them distinctive and they were well written out! From what it seems like, the characters in the story have their own set of personalities that they uphold which makes the story even more interesting! There was also characters background written in there which made me understand the story more, it is good! World background : the world was fine, it was set in the royalty reincarnation theme and it was also written according to it too! There wasn’t much world background(?) but there were some details here and there describing the things and events happening so it’s all good~ My thoughts : this was a great read! I did take my time but I’m glad I got to read this story!! The story itself intrigued me to continue on, reading and I loved it a lot! The author seems like they know where they want to develop and bring their story to, I hope to see more of this, you can do it Author and good job~ ✨✨

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    Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate
    Fantasy · MayDreamer
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the synopsis was attractive and so is the story itself. The story plot seems interestingly unique and I can see the story’s potential to soar to great heights!! The flow was great, not too fast nor slow! Writing quality : the writing style was great , making it easy to understand and read the story! It's also written in a first-person view! Updating : the updates seem fine as this book is new and only has 5 amazing chapters so far! Characters : Ella has a not great kind of family background with a kind of family that does not care nor like a single bit about her. The descriptions of the characters were great and were distinctive enough to show what they look like and the differences! The characters and the monsters were well written and described out!! World background : There were some small details about the world and surrounding here and there in the paragraphs which is good~! there were some bits here and there about the surroundings around like the mansion, how the mansion looked like on the inside! My thoughts : the story captivated me and it was interesting! I really love how the story started out and it got me reading on. I do hope to see more of this with the upcoming chapters and I can tell the author knows where they want to take the story to! Great work author and keep it up! ✨✨

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    The Mask Of The Monster
    Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the book was amazing! It has a nice plot line and the flow of the story was just nice! The synopsis was great and everything in the story adds up to the greatness of it! Writing quality : the writing was great and there were less to no mistakes made! The sentences were written out well with great use of words!! The writing technique was unique and it brings out the story reading! Updating : the updates are stable~ Characters : they were well written and well crafted out! They were well described and explained in auxiliary chapters, on how their names are named and the other descriptions! I love the characters for their own unique like style and their speaking dialogues were fresh to the eyes!! World background : it is written out well with some great descriptions on things and the choice of words to describe them were amazing!! It brings out the imaginations of it, more clearer~ it also shows the authors creativity with words and how it is able to attract the attention of the readers! My thoughts : I love it!! This is a rare hidden gem!! The story itself had me captivated and the starting got me hooked into reading more of the awesome content! This book has the potential to soar with the great writing creativity of the authors!! I hope to see more of this and great work author, keep it up!! ✨☺️

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    A Sliver of Frost
    Fantasy · MoYun_ZJ
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the concept of the story was unique and the plot line was interesting! The synopsis really draws the attention of the readers to dig in more into the story! Writing quality : the story had little to no mistakes made in the story, even there was a mistake, it wouldn’t affect the reading of the story. The writing style was unique and easy to read with good words used in a first person view. Updating : the updates are stable! Characters : the main character was described well in the auxiliary chapter, there were details on how the he looked like and what family background he has. He also has his own set of personality which can be seen in the story! The character dialogues were also interesting and fresh to the eyes~! World background : the magical background of other things were well written and described out by the author in the auxiliary chapter! The details given was understandable and great. The imaginative creativity put into this was great as it is created by the author! My thoughts : the story definitely has the potential to soar into great heights! Though I am not a type into action kind of books but this one was a good read and would definitely recommend it!! hope to see you continue this amazing story, keep up the good work author!!! ✨☺️

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    Mythologies: A Devil Prince's Revenge
    Fantasy · SabergKeys
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the synopsis of the book caught my attention and the plot line was great! The story itself was magnificent! The author knows where he/she wants to take the story to! Writing quality : the writing was good and there were not many grammatical mistakes made in there. The writing style was easy to understand and the story flow was just great! Updating : stable updates for the story! Characters : the characters were captivating and they each had their own set of personalities that makes the story even more interesting! Fate has brought the two to meet and cross paths, I can’t wait to see what awaits ahead. World background : the background descriptions were well written! The actions that happen were detailed and descriptive, which makes the story more pleasing to read!! My thoughts : the story was great and seemed realistic in terms of some parts and I feel like I could feel their emotions through the story. It definitely is a hidden gem read! Really hope to see more of the story, good job author and keep up the good work!! ☺️✨

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    Lost Souls' Rendezvous [Will be republished]
    Realistic · Luminous_Arcadian
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : The story plot was greatly amazing, it was really engaging to read and the pace/flow of the story was constant and smooth. There were amazing words used in the story and the author has their way with words! Writing quality : the writing of the story had little to no mistakes made! Updating : there’s no problem with the updates, they are on track and it’s great! Characters : the characters I’ve seen were all well written and were also described in much details, making them imaginable in the brain! They were interestingly unique, the persona of each character was different in a way that brings out their each uniqueness to the story! World background : the world was great! The creativity was there and it is hard to come up with the right words to describe the background but the author nailed it!! It was well written too! My thoughts : personally I don’t read much of dark fantasy action novels but this book was awesome! It is definitely a hidden gem that is able to soar high! I liked the book and hope to see more of the great work so keep it up and good job author!! ✨✨

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    The Nine Monarchs
    Fantasy · TheMortalGod
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the story was great and the plot seemed interesting with the famous vampires. The story flow was fine and the paragraph sentences, some were long and some were just fine, well it might be just me but it’s okay! Writing quality : the story had little to no mistakes in the story! Updating : the updates I would say stable and on track as now it only has 5 chapters and I hope for more~! Characters : the characters seemed unique and interesting. Arete, a girl who can’t be compelled by any vampires and seems immune to them. The vampire boys, I can’t wait to see how the characters in the story develop as it goes on! World background : There wasn’t any much descriptions and details about the world background(?) but so far it seems like a modern vampire and human story! My thoughts : this story intrigued me, the story seems relatively new since it only has 5 chapters but the chapters were great! Though I really hope to see more of the story~! Hope you keep up the good work and good job author!! ✨✨

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    NOW LICENSED UNDER POPINK
    Fantasy · Blackpaint
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the story is a great read for those who likes the romance genre, the prologue was a great hook to attract the readers! The flow of the story was great and understandable. Writing quality : The writing style was okay and the quality was great! Though I think you can maybe add in quotation marks for the dialogues? It’s just a suggestion from me, it is still understandable even without it! Updating : The updates are stable and on track! Really hope to see more chapters on this!! Characters : the characters seemed uniquely interesting! I can see that they each have their own set of personalities and the character emotions were well brought out by the author! There were also some good descriptions about the characters! World background : the world background was not much described by the author and I was wondering if this is a werewolf kind of story in a modern world setting? It would be good to describe it a little to let the readers know more about the world! My thoughts : I really love the romance genre and this story is just my cup of tea! I really liked the story flow and I really want to see more of it! I hope you keep up the great work and good job author!! ✨✨

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    OUR FLAME: ALWAYS AND FOREVER
    Teen · Uzowei_Tehillah
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : the book was captivating and seems very promising! It was a great read, the plot was interesting and the creativity was there that makes the story even more better! It was also able to pull the reader in! Writing quality : the writing quality was good and there was less to no mistakes in the story!! Updating : currently has its amazing chapter, it’s stable and on track! Characters : the characters were well written and you get to see some background information of the characters in the chapters. They seemed interesting and unique in their own ways, with their different personalities! World background : The background was well written and it had a great description to it! The author describes the world and the powers in details, in the auxiliary parts of the book, which was good!! My thoughts : personally I don’t read this kind of genres but the story was good and it made me kept on scrolling to read!! I would love to see how the story goes on as more chapters come! I know creation is hard but keep up the good work author and good job!! ✨☺️

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    D E L E T E D.
    Fantasy · Cyclxne
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : The book synopsis and cover was amazing and the same goes for the story. The royalty themed story was able to be seen and the story was great!! Writing quality : the writing style was good! Though there were some small minor grammar mistakes here and there but it’s fine, it’s didn’t affect the reading!! Updating : I know creation can be hard but I can see the efforts put into it bu the author!! Characters : the characters were well written and it made them seem interesting. There were also some descriptions on how the characters look like which made the visualisation of them better!! Emily as the princess and Lily as the village girl was good!! World background : There could be more descriptions to describe the world in the fantasy setting but the royalty setting could be seen well! My thoughts : The story was a great read to me, it had the potential and I would love to see more of the story! I would love to also see how Emily and Lily develop as the story chapter goes on! I liked the story and hope you keep up the amazing work of yours! Good job author!! ✨✨

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    My Second Life as a princess
    Fantasy · Oya_Dawish
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : The story was amazing along with the synopsis that caught my eyes and it definitely has the potentials to rise up!! I would recommend this to whoever like a enemy to lover romance! The plot was fresh and interesting and i had fun reading it! Writing quality : The writing was amazing and the style was great! There weren’t any much mistakes spotted whatsoever!! Updating : the story only has 4 chapters and I would say it is stable and great! Really hope to see more chapters though~ Characters : ooolala~ the characters were well written and they were interestingly unique to the eyes. I love how they are enemies and that they hate each other! They also have their own set of personality’s! World background : there were minor descriptions about the background(?) or maybe it’s just me- My thoughts : So far from what I’ve read, I’m already wanting the next chapter already! The story was great and I love the characters, I really hope to see what will happen to their rivalry love will go on! Hope to see more of it and good work author!! ✨✨

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    Never Over
    Urban · ClaisiceLouice
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : Since there are only 3 chapters, I would say this story was a great read for a romance lover like me! The synopsis was captivating and I just had to read the story! Writing quality : The writing quality and style were both good and there were no mistakes seen whatsoever!! Updating : there are currently just 3 chapters and I would say that the updates are stable! Characters : the characters seemed unique and interesting to me and they had their own purpose of living! It was well written! I love the mature dialogues that were written! World background : there were minor descriptions about the world background(?) but it’s fine!! Probably just me- My thoughts : The story was good and I loved it! Though I really hoped that there were more chapters to read and I would love to see what happened in the next chapter! Hope you keep up the good work author! ✨✨

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    Secret Marriage of the Ideal couple
    Urban · miu_hozuki
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
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    Overall : The story was captivating and it has the potential to soar! This is recommended to those who are into action and thriller stories! It would be a great read! Writing quality : The writing style was good and there wasn’t any mistakes spotted by me! Though the sentence paragraphs could be split and be made shorter but it didn’t affect the reading so it’s okay! Updating : the updates are stable and on track, though I wished that there were more chapters to read~ Characters : the characters were well written and the descriptions of how they look like were awesome too! It made them seemed interesting and unique. World background : the background was well written also and it helps with the visualising of how the world and things look like were great! I liked it! My thoughts : I liked the part where Asher and Tiara fought, it seemed realistic that I could even imagine it happening! I really liked the story and hope to see more of the upcoming chapters ahead~ Good work author and keep it up! ✨☺️

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    Disoul
    Sci-fi · ARnab
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
    Replied to _Meggie_

    Well, it would be the way he talks and looks, since he looks cold, inside out~ even his stares-

    "Don't be too quick to judge Jennie~ you just heard it from people but that doesn't mean he is one." She said, making Jennie stare at her in disbelief but what can she say?
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    The Queen Of Shadows
    Fantasy · dinoriii
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
    Replied to _Meggie_

    Vivian is a bunny, who can switch between a human form and a bunny form but most of the time she will be in her bunny form at school and out of school. Unless there’s a need to be human~ Its the same that goes for the rest, Jennie who is a bear and Gavin who is a werewolf (ETC.). They do have the respective ears and tails and they do wear clothes- I hope this makes sense and clears the doubts~! If there’s anything else your curious or confused about, you may ask away! ✨☺️

    "Look, it's that pathetic looking bunny again~" Jake, that was a silver ranked bear with black hair, walked over to her as she slowly backed away until she hit a dustbin. She stared at each of them with fear in her eyes...
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    The Queen Of Shadows
    Fantasy · dinoriii
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  • dinoriii
    dinoriii2yr
    Replied to Aeipathy_02

    Oh, I use some fonts that come from font apps that are downloaded in my phone and added it into the phone keyboards~! ☺️

    "Thank you for telling me Jen, I'll get going first." Without looking back, she left the dorm and walked down the hallways. 𝑾𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒅 𝒐𝒇 𝒓𝒖𝒍𝒆𝒔 𝒊𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒔...𝒊𝒕 𝒅𝒐𝒆𝒔𝒏'𝒕 𝒎𝒂𝒌𝒆 𝒂𝒏𝒚 𝒔𝒆𝒏𝒔𝒆.
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    The Queen Of Shadows
    Fantasy · dinoriii
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