Reviews of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
PurpleSpring
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- Character Design
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I have not read this yet... Just trying to help a bit with rating... Anyways, Author, I was going to read this. But I saw some mixed reviews here. Specially about someone named Qing yi. I suppose that is the first disciple of MC. But I saw in comments that she has got quite an attitude. But I don't like when characters who are MCs allies or disciples or family think they are mightier and better than MC (Even if they are, they better shut their mouth Infront of MC is What I think they should have LOL...😂) Well, Anyways, I love this kind of trope so I hope you can clear this matter to me... and does MC has a lover? Is this a harem?
A very enjoyable novel, I really like that most of the characters feel very reasonable and the main character is actually a very likeable person which is very rare in xianxia stories. The world building is also very good and I'm actually interested about the history of this cultivation world and want to know more. The only downside is it is a little slow, but I'll take that over the poor and repetitive writing in most other xianxia stories. Excellent work author
text to speech ahead. everything you are about to read is a complete rant, mixed with my brutally honest opinion with zero filter and exactly how I felt, all with text to speech enjoy. the novel is very interesting it's a nice concept and the author kind of makes it work. my main issue and it's kind of a deal breaker and why I'm dropping this novel is that it is way too slow. and I don't mean it's not enough action what I mean is the author has so many unrelated side things that need to be done from a random character's perspective that it kind of takes away from the story in my opinion. I understand that this novel is about disciples and it makes it interesting but what I don't like is how little we get of the main character. and even when we get quite a bit of the main character it's very monotonous. one of the things I hit the most to novels is very boring trips I don't really add much to the story the author just put it there to spice things up but there's literally zero reason why it has to happen. for me that is about a 40 chapter point in the novel where the main character goes to a secret Realm that takes way too long to talk about for how little actually happens. like I understand it's something new and interesting and obviously the main character is going to kind of take his time but when the entire ordeal could be probably summarized in 10 chapters maximum and still be very interesting it's not interesting to read anymore. and I can't keep reading the story when I know that this isn't the last time that something like this happens. I'm fine with a few side things happening here and there or when we see the story from someone else's perspective or we go off for like five chapters and look at the disciples or other things but I just can't keep reading when I've had almost 80 chapters pass and the only thing relevant to the plot that's happened is that the plague God started to cure the plague they spread in the Azure Kingdom and the main character went up one realm of Power with his domain, and he became an alchemist because of the system reward. I just summarized everything important that happened in 80 chapters in a sentence, and if you read that sentence and continued on with the story after the secret realm interlude everything would still make complete sense and you wouldn't be lost. it's because it's strung on for so long that I have to drop this novel. I would have dropped it much sooner if I didn't bulk by 100 chapters and wanted to read through all of them just to get my money's worth. and I don't think that I hate the snorkel it is a relatively good novel especially for an original piece but unfortunately the author just writes at a little bit too slow of a pace for me and I like to give my complete brutal honest opinion. out of 10 Stars I would probably give this about a 7 and 1/2. not bad at all but you're not going to read through it and think that it was a novel of the year, and it's not a novel that you come back to read a second time. but keep up the good work author It's relatively good still and it's nice to see original pieces, don't get discouraged from my hate there are plenty of others that point out all the good things you do.
(I've read until ~75) I really like that the story starts with our MC already being an elder at a decent sect. There are already too many "from trash to genius" stories out there, imho. The system is pretty low-key, and doesn't force our MC to go out of his way to do stupid stuff. On top of it, it doesn't stop our MC from cultivating normally. Great! (Later, the system gets more "features", so this might change.) The world seems fine, I guess. Nothing memorable yet. Same for the writing quality, though I did notice paragraphs that could have been shortened and/or merged with the following ones. This part is obviously very subjective, but personally I don't get why "every" cultivation novel needs to be comedy. Some humor is ok and in the beginning this story was fine, but after a while it got a bit annoying for me. This also seems to "influence" the PoVs of the disciples. Don't get me wrong, I like that we get different perspectives, but not when they feel more like filler episodes. Like one disciple having a bad sense of direction and not finding his master's room, or the other one becoming greedy after finding out about alchemy. I stopped reading, but if you like the slower pace and humor, you might enjoy this one.
This is a really good chill cultivation novel that’s a bit more slow paced than others. The good thing about this novel is that the Mc doesn’t rely on the system and the system is not that important to the story. The system doesn’t force the Mc to do anything and is more of an overal plus. Good cultivation novel.
Love it! This is a great novel that I recently discovered. I’ve been recently focusing on novels where the Mac takes disciples and this is the best one I’ve read yet (please recommend me more if you happen to know any, no harem tho plz). The author has made it clear that while this will have no harem, there will be romance in it. The world building is good, but the same generic xianxia world, which is why I only have it four stars. In the future, I hope there will be even more master-disciple scenes and disciple-disciple scenes. Thanks!
This Book is amazing. I feel horrible that I forgot about this masterpiece. The author is super interactive, and the story is wonderful. WQ: 5/5, almost no grammar errors and good flow. SOU: OBV amazing. SD: Good, not 2 slow, not too fast, makes sense. CD, Good MC, makes sense, wonderful design. WB: Cool, there are small contradictions, that the author fixes if someone points out, but overall makes sense and I love it.
Writing Quality 4/5: It's good, but I do think saw misspellings not sure from time to time; so for now I'll give this a 4/5. - Story Development 4/5: I like (love?) the plot, and it going to a good direction so far. - Character Design 4/5: Xuan Hao is intelligent and cool but not emotionless and morally cringe. I transmigrate to a xianxia/wuxia/xuanhuan novel as a OP-from-the-start MC, I would aspire to be like him. Updating Stability 5/5: Some might like daily chapters, but what really matters is that the story isn't bland. In other words, as long as the author writes four great chapters a month, this is going to get a 5/5. - World Background 4/5: There's an air of mystery about the world, characters, and cultivation. The lore is not bad as well. - Overall 4.2/5: I would probably recommend this to a newbie in Chinese progression fantasy because it's so easy to get into.
