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Review Detail of Commander_Conquer in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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(I've read until ~75) I really like that the story starts with our MC already being an elder at a decent sect. There are already too many "from trash to genius" stories out there, imho. The system is pretty low-key, and doesn't force our MC to go out of his way to do stupid stuff. On top of it, it doesn't stop our MC from cultivating normally. Great! (Later, the system gets more "features", so this might change.) The world seems fine, I guess. Nothing memorable yet. Same for the writing quality, though I did notice paragraphs that could have been shortened and/or merged with the following ones. This part is obviously very subjective, but personally I don't get why "every" cultivation novel needs to be comedy. Some humor is ok and in the beginning this story was fine, but after a while it got a bit annoying for me. This also seems to "influence" the PoVs of the disciples. Don't get me wrong, I like that we get different perspectives, but not when they feel more like filler episodes. Like one disciple having a bad sense of direction and not finding his master's room, or the other one becoming greedy after finding out about alchemy. I stopped reading, but if you like the slower pace and humor, you might enjoy this one.

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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Understand what you mean and also moved away from it latter on :d