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HegemonDao

HegemonDao

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I Love Cultivation Novels.

2022-04-28 JoinedGlobal
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao2d
    Replied to HegemonDao

    Well never mind, I already read it...

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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao4d
    Replied to Omar_4718

    Man, Are you crazy? What's going on here? It's normal for an author to review his/her work. After all they are readers of their own works. Afterall, from all those reviews present, one or two more doesn't work. If i were to say in mathematics, if the review count is 4.69... then after two more reviews it will still be the same considering many reviews it has. It will perhaps increase the rating to 4.6901. I guess you understand this...

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    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao5d
    Commented

    do you have that pic with you, now? I am new to the novel, so I don’t know what you are talking about?[img=thinking]

    The novel's cover got removed for being explicit and now I can't update it. I can update after 3 days… I am so sad.
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
    Eastern · Akkuzz_69
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao6d
    Replied to Lonelythree

    Sigh! To your story, To what you wanted, you did well. I mean you wanted to hit at something and you did. And we also thought why did that happen? BUT, You could have done for some other scenario, I just feel...*Sigh* Let's not talk about it. Since I know no one is at wrong here, I will keep reading with my mouth shut (As I always did...) But even if all changes, I will never get myself to like Irina as a character, maybe I won't hate her, maybe I'll become neutral. That's what happen with Xia Qingyue of Against the Gods. She did everything for Yun che, but the way she did or to be precise, the way author delivered it made me drop the novel. But here it was not to that extreme, since you showed things related to Leon and irina in flashbacks. So it's fine.... Well anyway, calm down mate, And write well while also balancing your studies, You can do that. i think this is your first book. right? Write your second, third and so on... You will be a great author, because your first attempt is already better than others. At least better than mine.

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    Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
    Fantasy · Lonelythree
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao6d
    Replied to Lonelythree

    That's why I didn't give 1 star. but 3 stars. The story was good. I read it happily. But I feel irritated on how you wrote until, chapter 202 (I am there currently). I mean I didn't stop reading. I am reading, and if I am satisfied with the future story, i will edit this and give the maximum I can. I am still reading and will keep reading... But what annoyed me is how you delivered Irina's part. Not any otherthing, They maybe Lies. But Irina felt it as real, so did Leon. So even if they are lies, even if leon knows they maybe lies, even if Irina knows that she was manipulated, the way you delivered is what you made me frustrated. Like, You could have not used other Leon to control Leon's actions. It just felt forced. Ah! whatever, I will just see what happens.

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    Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
    Fantasy · Lonelythree
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao6d
    Posted

    Author, If you are seeing this, I am not telling you that this Novel is bad. It's quite good and the start is also good. But somehow you took some wrong decisions. Even if Irina becomes a Loveinterest or normal mother, I don't care since this is a fantasy. But the way you delivered that is what went wrong. I'll continue reading, after all I also want to see the truth, Seph's battle etc. But I am not really fond of this novel as I was before. I honestly want to see Irina as a love interest, not because of any other reason but because, I want to see how MC forgives her and accept her. After all, knowingly or unknowingly what she did doesn't justify. (It's because of how you wrote that everything happened due to some external force, that this went downhill for me. You could have written like, although she was controlled, even she subconsciously didn't care much for her son due to his low potential) Writing quality for me is 5/5

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    Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
    Fantasy · Lonelythree
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao6d
    Replied to Black_Eyes140

    Well, I read some more chapters. But i feel disgusted and 'cringe' with the recent developments. I mean in one of next chapters. "Mot..I mean Woman..." This is a phrase uttered by him, and Irina feels the motherly love. It's normal to feel mother's love. But Leon (maybe there are same...But for now they aren't, ) so why call her 'mother'... I just... Maybe I'll drop it. Author, If you are seeing this, I am not telling you that this Novel is bad. It's quite good and the start is also good. But somehow you took some wrong decisions. Even if Irina becomes a Loveinterest or normal mother, I don't care since this is a fantasy. But the way you delivered that is what went wrong. I'll continue reading, after all I also want to see the truth, Seph's battle etc. But I am not really fond of this novel as I was before.

    Ch 171 171:Lecture In The Battlefield.
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    Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
    Fantasy · Lonelythree
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao7d
    Replied to Black_Eyes140

    Honestly What's Author doing? A good book, just because he want to make the bond working again 'by some supernatural things involved'. I first hooked into the novel, thinking she will regret a lot for many chapters. And also perhaps she age due to regret and finally MC cures her. But doesn't allow her to be a part of his life. He will forgive her, But later. Not like this...This is just...

    Ch 171 171:Lecture In The Battlefield.
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    Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
    Fantasy · Lonelythree
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao7d
    Replied to Labrenyth

    Such a thing happened.....Then should I perhaps....stop reading it.

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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao8d
    Replied to Odayaka

    Yep

    Ch -1 Summary From Chapter 4 to Chapter 20.
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    Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
    Eastern · Odayaka
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao8d
    Replied to Odayaka

    You earned yourself a new fan then. ❤️ Should I purchase it today or in the next month? only 7 days for the end of the month, right?

    Ch -1 Summary From Chapter 4 to Chapter 20.
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    Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
    Eastern · Odayaka
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao8d
    Commented

    Good. But Author, I want to ask you. I am going to purchase Privilege. But before that, I want to know, one thing? Will this novel has the usual trope where MC is forced to separate with one of his wives or one of wives forget about him etc. like things...? I personally hate that kind of things. That's why I asked. If not, I can start reading without any problems. Hope to get your answers.

    Ch -1 Summary From Chapter 4 to Chapter 20.
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    Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
    Eastern · Odayaka
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao11d
    Commented

    Isn't she his Mother? When did he become his Aunt?

    1) Ye Xueyin (real name=Ye Zhuixin. Maternal aunt. MILF)
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    illicit relationship
    Realistic · Shooting_Star
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao11d
    Replied to gilbert_blakely

    Well Let's see. If you find anything in the future chapters, At least update in the fandom or message me here. And Thank You for the reply.

    Ch 521 Reminder Of A Painful Past
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao11d
    Replied to Resurgent

    Aira, What would happen to her? Would you forgive her by telling that She did all those for a purpose...? it is fine if you do that, But I hope you give her some sort of punishment too... Not why she did that? It's she did that, and she deserve a punishment for all those things Cedric/Asher had to face, alone.

    "The guards told me that they already briefly told you who you are but don't misunderstand your status just because you are the husband of our queen in name. You better keep your head low and exist as if you don't exist, just like before. Then everything will go on peacefully. Just don't cause a nuisance for our queen. This is my fair warning to you. Otherwise, you will see my face more often. And trust me…you don't want to," Ceti said in a sharp tone.
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao12d
    Commented

    What does it mean here? Can't use Mana in the castle?

    Ceti took a good look at the room, especially the mess created, and said, "Your Majesty, it seems like the assassin got here a while before we got here. That means he knew he did not use his mana since the castle's defensive arrays would have killed him earlier."
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao12d
    Replied to

    If that is true, THen I would worship you everyday. I really F**** Hate these B****es.

    "The guards told me that they already briefly told you who you are but don't misunderstand your status just because you are the husband of our queen in name. You better keep your head low and exist as if you don't exist, just like before. Then everything will go on peacefully. Just don't cause a nuisance for our queen. This is my fair warning to you. Otherwise, you will see my face more often. And trust me…you don't want to," Ceti said in a sharp tone.
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao12d
    Replied to gilbert_blakely

    Sure! Anyways, About Aira, Through the future chapter's foreshadowing, Do you think she is a good one or a pathetic villain...? Just this question pls.

    Ch 521 Reminder Of A Painful Past
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao14d
    Replied to HegemonDao

    I hope she doesn't become someone like, "I did it for you" and finally get revealed as some sort of goddess who helped MC.

    Ch 521 Reminder Of A Painful Past
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • HegemonDao
    HegemonDao14d
    Replied to gilbert_blakely

    Thanks for the information. I have been hooked to this novel and I am loving it right now. I wish it remain the same. Happy Reading!!

    Ch 521 Reminder Of A Painful Past
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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