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Review Detail of Gian_Carpio in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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The author likes adding absolutely nothing. Stacks upon paragraphs for things that doesn’t matter. I can sum up first 100 chapters in a few sentences and you would read ahead as if you havent skipped anything His disciples and servants dont respect him

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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If you’re funny, stay in that lane, and if you’re not then stay faraway. You could do many things even if you are not. You can make this a more serious book, or a mystical one thats just a bit void of humor. The characters conversations are steered way too much into humor. It kills them and denies them of any character because if you cant build up someone to be funny, it will be a husk of a character completely made out of cringe.