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text to speech ahead. everything you are about to read is a complete rant, mixed with my brutally honest opinion with zero filter and exactly how I felt, all with text to speech enjoy. the novel is very interesting it's a nice concept and the author kind of makes it work. my main issue and it's kind of a deal breaker and why I'm dropping this novel is that it is way too slow. and I don't mean it's not enough action what I mean is the author has so many unrelated side things that need to be done from a random character's perspective that it kind of takes away from the story in my opinion. I understand that this novel is about disciples and it makes it interesting but what I don't like is how little we get of the main character. and even when we get quite a bit of the main character it's very monotonous. one of the things I hit the most to novels is very boring trips I don't really add much to the story the author just put it there to spice things up but there's literally zero reason why it has to happen. for me that is about a 40 chapter point in the novel where the main character goes to a secret Realm that takes way too long to talk about for how little actually happens. like I understand it's something new and interesting and obviously the main character is going to kind of take his time but when the entire ordeal could be probably summarized in 10 chapters maximum and still be very interesting it's not interesting to read anymore. and I can't keep reading the story when I know that this isn't the last time that something like this happens. I'm fine with a few side things happening here and there or when we see the story from someone else's perspective or we go off for like five chapters and look at the disciples or other things but I just can't keep reading when I've had almost 80 chapters pass and the only thing relevant to the plot that's happened is that the plague God started to cure the plague they spread in the Azure Kingdom and the main character went up one realm of Power with his domain, and he became an alchemist because of the system reward. I just summarized everything important that happened in 80 chapters in a sentence, and if you read that sentence and continued on with the story after the secret realm interlude everything would still make complete sense and you wouldn't be lost. it's because it's strung on for so long that I have to drop this novel. I would have dropped it much sooner if I didn't bulk by 100 chapters and wanted to read through all of them just to get my money's worth. and I don't think that I hate the snorkel it is a relatively good novel especially for an original piece but unfortunately the author just writes at a little bit too slow of a pace for me and I like to give my complete brutal honest opinion. out of 10 Stars I would probably give this about a 7 and 1/2. not bad at all but you're not going to read through it and think that it was a novel of the year, and it's not a novel that you come back to read a second time. but keep up the good work author It's relatively good still and it's nice to see original pieces, don't get discouraged from my hate there are plenty of others that point out all the good things you do.

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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Thanks for the review ^^