It's a surprisingly good novel. I was expecting it to be a very Please share a system novel that doesn't add anything to itself. I was very happily surprised when reading this that it Took multiple different twists and turns and hardly followed cliche's period I can't recommend this book enough and honestly if it had even more chapters. I would love it even more. But now I have to sit here and wait. 3 or 4 months so I can get a good stock pile to start reading. And it's gonna be torturous, but it's worth it.

he dosent progress past journeyman for over 4.5k chapters after he reaches it. I don't care what type of novel you write, if your mc makes no major leaps in "power" for 4.5 thousand chapters there's no reason to read. if this was a pure space opera instead of a system novel I'd agree but the author includes a system tag yet writes out. seems scummy to me

brother the arc is over 500 chapters long and adds nothing to the story. it's a filler arc larger than the novel at the time it was written. worse yet is dthe author dumps the system even after he gets it back. there's a diffrence between making a few mistakes as an author and completely neutering your novel because you don't want the mc to progress in power

The author completely shifts the focus of the smaller and outright tells the readers to go f*** off period instead of having a system, Mecca novel that is relatively fun and interesting. Like the first 300 chapters you read. Instead, it turns into a book with over 3000 filler chapters that. Add nothing to the story comma nothing to our main character and overall bring down the novel.

we know because ves was a pure human before being experimented on. that's the reason he couldn't go above 2 on his stats as said by the system

the system is repeatedly shown to be a highly advanced machine and each reward is already shown to exist in the inner galaxy due to advanced resources. instead we have a ghost who appears for zero reason other than slowing down the story so the author can have more filler chapters. the ghost bypassed everything we've established and even went through all the highlyadvanced systems that picked up the other energy beings who this ghost was afraid of so there's no reason the ship can't detect the ghost. it's fair to be upset when the ghost does nothing but hinder the story and also for some reason turns our intelligent mc into an idiot, also bypassing lucky programing that is supposed to be loyal to ves and also contradicting itself by saying the cat obeys the mother more than it's owner even though it's shown nothing but fear each time it showed up previous but suddenly it's completely fine and even loyal to said ghost. all in all most of us are upset due to the inconsistencies and the forced interference that slows thw story to a crawl

kinda pointless to have these chapters unless ypu read the other stories. the focus of this novel is ghost and right now we are just watching the mcs of other novels so, I presume, the author can try to get others to read them. personally I planned om it after catching up to this novels current chapter but seeing the story forced in this novel amd add nothing to michales story while also being filler chapters is a bit upsetting

probably gonna bully him or something worse.

just skipping Gayas chapters because just being with Noah leaves a bad taste in my mouth plus none of it's gonna matter once she reunites with ghost

author dosent know how to pace the progression so he has to give an artifical and very forced handicap

gonna give this a read when it gets a few more chapters

after writing the review it became a but longer than expeted so befire anything else, give thus novel a go. its amazing, one of the better ones i ever read and thats not just romance but books in general. good book. never read a supposed romance novel before and decided to give it a go. the mc is a bit overly (for a lack of better words) simpish. but it gets explained and the mc grows out of it. sure it got a bit annoying but overall it was good. the twist and turns woth the narrative as the story opens up was amazing. going from a teen romance in an academy with a hint of magic for variety, to murder, torture, vengeance, magic vs. martial arts and even gods was spectacular. I hate how our mc gets separated from his lover after getting rid of tge big bad just for the big bad to not be fully dead and intent on harming zoemi amd those close to him was aggravating since I believe our mc could have used some rest and maybe a bit more romance since we ha ent seen that in like 200 chapters at that point. don't get me wrong the characters don't stop being lovey dovey and stuff just thier relationship never goes forward. still great interaction but zoemi needed a rest after being pronounced dead and murdered by cherro while being abandoned by presence and the origonal personality. at chapter 600 so still have 1/4 of the story left but it's stoll a shame the love birds haven't been reunited. now comes a but of a rant for where I'm at in the story since I just want to wrote my words down. none of this is part of the review. I swear if the author killed mierriet or something else after zoemi goes through all this shit imma lose it. the author isn't opposed to killing characters after 400 chapters of constant interaction and almost becoming on the level of the leading 3 and theen killing off those who start getting redeemed and becoming friends with the main cast and joining the circle. he also has no hesitation to make a character who was well liked betray zoemi and everyone else for at first what seems a forced reason and wasn't of her own will( barbarian hexe, basically mind control) but then it's revealed she's just a dirt bag even after some more redemption from an alternate time line. God I love the story and the author but the twist and turns are so good it's frustrating. I legit have never read a romance novel before and after a year of this one occasionally being recommended I caved and I got the romance for the first 200 chapters and it turned into so much more. great novel please give it. a read.

I just hope mierriet isn't undyingly loyal or controlled by presence

y'know thanks to this mierriet talking about presence I remeber she also new of presence in the real timeline. I hope she isn't a puppet or an individual made by presence since that would ruin the romance and relationship of her and zoemi in general and I would be genuinely sad to learn that she was essentially forced to be with zoemi given what we know of presence and such. hope it dosent end up happening and it was just mierriet thinking she was ehmi instead due to presence maguc

hope she gets horrifically murdered

S tier spell name

thought maybe we would've gotten a tomboy who dressed as male to hide thier gender for background reasons and instead it's a tranny. my dissapointment. still a good character

nooooo I caught up. i save up chapters for 3 months just for a cliff hanger

I know that all of this really is retribution. But I hope that someone somehow. Riley gets back to his universe and does horrid things with even less reservations. I basically just want him to be Riley. Except turned up to 11 or something. Perhaps he gains more emotions in this new universe. And whatever other ones he ends up going to, but instead of making him more humane, they twist him even further.

the master of subterfuge