Bro I think you might wanna slow down The sect's Expansion a little bit. As the disparity between MC and others are too much. I think they should Slow down and increase their overall Cultivation. They don't even have enough Domain Realm cultivators.

Giving you 5 star just to ask how are tou getting ideas? Im'm Also writing a novle but sometimes i have a lot of ideas but I don't know how I should progress the story. Can you give me some suggestions

thanks. Much appreciated. Are you contracted?

can you tell me when I Should apply for a contract? I only have 6 chapters so far. Should i write more? or Apply now ? I really appreciate it. And I do started posting in Wattpad.

I have a question I am Also writing a novle. but I saw there is too much restrictions In exclusive contracts. and apparantly i am eligible for applying contract I have only 6 ch till now. I am hoping to get non exclusive contracts. do you know the procedure?

Lets see what happens. till now it going good way

It is really very similar to Blood Warlock novle. I feel like its wayyy too much happening very fast. Feels like Only Mc is useless And every other person is More powerful that him. I expected Omniscient Would be Like research type Mc with unparalleled wisdom trying to uncover secrets of universe or maybe make super technique bla bla bla. But what he has given? Fking Photographic memory heck mc still have to manually read them what's use of it? Atleast give him High intelligence super fast processing speed. not Some useless Thingie. What's use of this Tallent? Mc is still Dumb and slow. Just go somewhere and farm bruh. Make him genius atleast? I mean What useless Mc He seems to be know nothing feel like he doesn't belong to this planet. And He is just a Plaything for powerful people. By looking at pacing It will probably take about 1k ch just to take revenge. Atleast Blood Warlock has Better Plot stability. Atleast, I expect mc to hide somewhere and farm but nope he got caught.

Just wanna know author Queen AI is how powerful? It literally can kill Strongest being In Alliance. and there was a hint that it has gotten Intelligence. Soo tell me what's your plan? Author? Why I can't see that Queen Ai is undefeafted

well LOTM is the best i have ever read. a Steampunk with lovecraftian horror and a unique way of power that i love. What i like About it the most is Power is not free you have to pay the price. And tallent doesn't matter what matters is your will and money.

just wanna know what is the cultivation realm break through speed. I don't wanna read novle where mc breaks through next realm after 400-500 ch.

Seems like starting is kinda similar to I reincarnated as s slime 1st ep. author probably took the refference. Tho its not so popular way of isekai but still is common

author why this unnessery r18 chapters? and this messy with sooo much fillers there should be a limit. story is not professing at all.

Shamelessly writing review again. Author.😅 Well it's the best novel i have read. Other than LOTM, ISSTH, other Er Gen's works, Heavenly Silkworm Potato's work, IET's works, And work of soul land series. I have been reading novel for almost 5 years. bro , I'm a bit picky. Now days only few novel i have been following. LOTM-2 , Outside of the time(waiting for finish) This novel, and another one- We Agreed to Brag Together, But You Secretly Dominated the World. Also I'm trying to read novels by non chinese author but you know not many novels had that. I always feel something Missing like a solidness between 2 major realms on those novels. like It becomes bit blur for power scalling. This thing is a major problem i have seen with many non chinese novels. Also there are other authors who ruined themselves like novel death guns in another world. was such a fresh concept having guns in isekai world. It was going good but latter stage author started to majorly foucs on r-18 parts ,forced harems, unnessery r18 chapters in name of plot devlopment. Plese don't become like them. Having little Romance is good but unnessery romance will ruin it.

Author You really love info dumps? I mean its ok to have Povs but why the hell i wanna read about all details of a person who is gonna be unrelated? like why i want to read a herbologist who is unrelated to case and acting as a Witness. Please don't just give soo much details. It's not like asking to expand an essay. Also will appreciate the potential future tragedy will be not that harsh. like Order will exist. I hope you do this. Not be too cruel. and don't be P**** and kill our fav characters 🥹

History's No.1 founder is good but I kinda don't like that much . Like it has only 5-6 Cultivation realms. Not enough for me. But I like yours Better It's much much better. I will say it is definitely the best I have read

not the pace of story but a bit faster for the cultivation realm increase. He is stuck there quite long already. He already is kinda in Earth Immortal realm. but hey author if you give the new realm new name. like you gave it to dao Domain=Soul.... Also i have a question I mean why Mc is following this Cultivation realm. Power seems Same as Soul...(don't remember) If possible could you clarify what's the advantage of being in this realm for mc. Like Mc is following a different path so there should be some differences from general path right? The only Difference I Can see is no tribulations and almost no bottlenecks. Btw u are doing good. Keep it up

Author could you please Increase the pace?

AUTHOR IF U DELETE THIS COMMENT THEN U KNOW THAT ALL I SAID IS TRUE AND ARE FARMING CHAPTERS.Author Are u retarted? why sooo many r18 chapter? are u farming chaps? by adding r18?. After 1k ch it doesn't make sense any more? if u really wanna write a good romance why not write a romance novel not a fantasy one. And why the novel's pacing is random? also why the hell u adding statuses and full status sooo much we dont need it. All started good and now u are just being greedy. 1500 ch and mc still stuck in the same world. Why sooo slow Maybe kt would have ended if u don't add soooooooooo many fillers.

Hellow author can u tell me why mike had advanced sss ranked concept? like for real? I don't understand that chapter. like there is too much going on, like how he get to origin plane?

man i have read enough swallowed star copy novles, even . complet martial arts attributes became copy, only if it was executed differently it would be master piece