I found the concept of the story interesting, all these things about tests, trials, etc., are really cool. The potential of the work is not bad. The biggest negative point of this story is the protagonist. The mc doesn't look anything like the strongest assassin in the past life, the mc doesn't have good control over his emotions (he should have since he's an assassin), the protagonist is very silly sometimes... What happened in the second trial between Aiden and Mia was ridiculous. Something typical of a silly Japanese isekai with fanservice where the girl likes the mc for random reasons, where they both fall to the floor and the mc's hands squeeze her melons by accident... bro, she asks for a kiss as a reward after all that ? and then sex? The protagonist acts very differently from what is expected of an assassin. sigh... I couldn't read after that. I found it very childish. If you are someone full of hormones who likes to do you know what, then you will have no problem with this.

yeah bro. because you know the feeling of having your memories manipulated haha

Thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapters!

WOW, that was amazing! This magic reminded me of "Avatar: The Last Airbender". It was even better because of the lightning.

"Elemental Chamber". I don't know what it is but I already know that this poor boy will suffer heavy humiliation. 🧙‍♂️

Since he messed up a "fair match", I think the mc will be punished. They probably also think Jared will lose. I doubt it.

Obviously the "impartial" jurors will prolong this... thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️

Will He still end up losing because of arrogance? That way of thinking... Typical of a cheap villain. thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️

Richard is that kind of cheap arrogant villain of the stories... Obviously, I hope to see him being humiliated at some point in the story hehehe I believe he will win, but it will not be as easy as he thought. thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️

thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️

WOW! Ciara took it pretty hard on him. Although I believe she shouldn't even be trying so hard. thx for the chapter.

Dropping here. The story had a lot of flaws at the beginning, it got a little better when he was betrayed by the family and got out of the cliche a little, and now it got worse with this suicide mission where he doesn't benefit at all. And why was he looking to seek revenge? I mean, I know what happened, but I thought he would have just wiped out his feelings for his foster family. Besides, after he was revealed as "Dark Mage" in his city, why wouldn't he think that the news wouldn't have gotten out and there would be people going to capture or kill him? In my point of view, there are many flaws in the script, unfortunately. Good luck to the author on this journey. Just think more about the coherence of the story.

I swear to you, Author, this chapter saved the rhythm of the previous ones. Come on, there was a childhood friend and romantic interest early on, a dumb extra wanting to kill the future prodigy of the church of light, the dumb people who didn't think that Gabriel might have been kidnapped or something and who didn't bother to investigate, the townspeople who saw Gabriel arriving barefoot, shirtless and dirty and no one thought anything was wrong... Look how many bad points. This chapter made things better. Although Gabriel was very innocent in revealing the secret, it makes sense for him to do so. After all, we are talking about his childhood friend and passion, the only person who could help him at that moment, in his thoughts. Her reaction was also understandable when we think of the church's profound brainwashing. Very good, author.

wow! Ed was amazing in that chapter.

Magic is such a wonderful thing... It's exciting just to imagine these fights. Too bad it doesn't exist. Thanks for the chapter

Edward is a nice guy. But he is so cringe lol hahaha thank you for the chapter.

Author, I don't really care if Aaron/Scar will have 1, 2 or 5 women, but as you mentioned that the mc's relationship will be like a rollercoaster ride and our modern society, I have to ask if any of the protagonist's women will stay with another man in the midst of these relationship turmoil. I hate NTR so I would like to know if there will be or not.

This is an excellent review. Wise words that help both the author and readers see certain things that make a story better. I will enter closed cultivation to process your teachings.

Good thing he didn't come up with taking the blood to the base. I imagine the number 42 getting very angry with someone next to him like this: