she was hungry last night and never got dinner and now it's morning and she's bathed and now she's getting dressed she's got to be hungry

hello author, you do indeed write well. you have so many words in your head I can see how you attempt to get all of them on the page. I just wanted to throw a little giggle out there that there are so many words in every paragraph and chapter and yet nothing actually ever happens. but definitely a well-rounded explanation of everything is always given. great job!!

when you're down in the sea, and an eel bites your knee, That's Amore

is the class only girls?

I do understand the need for filler to book up a story but then sometimes it's just a little weird. in the fact that these are a very primitive people although they are wolves with powers but they really go through a lot of clothes getting a fresh nightgown every night and their hand washing clothes so that's just a bunch of work for somebody and needing a completely submerged bath every night and sometimes twice a day even though she does have some pretty you know exhausting things going on but if it doesn't rain there's no water for bath so there should be some restraint I would think. but mostly I just think about all that laundry somebody has to do if you just took a bath you can wear that nightgown for 2 3 or 4 nights

her personality gets more and more rude with each pregnancy. she no longer says can you get me or please she just says go get me a root go get me these flowers go do this go do that. she has no manners at all anymore

his liver's hair completely changed the dynamic of that entire chapter

so it comes from a regular human world but he automatically accepts the fact that he'll be having intimate relations with another guy. nothing is written about him being uncomfortable about this fact

a poor job of editing to English. so many words since the beginning of this story have been the wrong word. kind of close but not the right word. author please find someone to edit your book again

a very true and well thought out answer . thank you !!! :-)

chapter 11. are we ever going to get the personal Viewpoint from the girl. coming from everyone else's opinion and thought process make sure seem like a real dummy

but what are they wearing???

I've been begging and crying for Dieg to have to come back for so long. I can't believe it worked out in the author brought him back hurray hurray I'm so happy

oh okay this time author wrote the word system next to Erie so now I remember that these are the systems of the mom and the children but I don't understand why she can speak to the children's system as well as her own. anyways my earlier comment should have been for author to write the word system next to their names so readers could remember who these names are. I'm not being mean I promise author. I'm just trying to help a little bit. and I'm not perfect obviously for sure not perfect

I have traveled back to Chapters and I can't find out who Erie and Rika are. I guess it's possible I missed it somewhere

author has a good start on writing and this is an interesting concept of a story for real. but it needs a lot more practice or maybe they are very young because once again mother and son can suddenly communicate in their brain but no writing was made available for this new skill previous to this. which the add-ons of these different subjects can really flush out a book and add a lot of content I feel like the author will probably be better in the future and I hope they rewrite this book with more information written within it in the future

I thought I read that he was only going to marry Charlotte the Goblin from the stall next door. now suddenly there's two Brides who's the other bride?

never mind my bad, I went back and found it I know who Maxim is

author who is Maxim?

arthur. when first born they boy mushroom was green and in the very next paragraph you changed him to Blue