elizabethe_eagles
Georgia USA. 56 year old single read 7 or 8 hours a day.
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a very true and well thought out answer . thank you !!! :-)
oh okay this time author wrote the word system next to Erie so now I remember that these are the systems of the mom and the children but I don't understand why she can speak to the children's system as well as her own. anyways my earlier comment should have been for author to write the word system next to their names so readers could remember who these names are. I'm not being mean I promise author. I'm just trying to help a little bit. and I'm not perfect obviously for sure not perfect
author has a good start on writing and this is an interesting concept of a story for real. but it needs a lot more practice or maybe they are very young because once again mother and son can suddenly communicate in their brain but no writing was made available for this new skill previous to this. which the add-ons of these different subjects can really flush out a book and add a lot of content I feel like the author will probably be better in the future and I hope they rewrite this book with more information written within it in the future