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There is something bothering me when reading this novel at a subconscious level. It feels like it's missing something. Like what some dude said, everybody is a main character in their own world or perspective. To me, it seems that your characters are like cardboard cutouts. Like it only exist to help the characters. That's their only purpose. You shouldn't have put too many characters in.
Pretty awesome. Highly recommend! Aside from my first reaction on using the name and personality of other characters from different franchise. It was smooth. I quickly adapted to it. Author used characters from different stories but only kept their look and personality, they also fit in the world. However, there are some minor contradictions in technology that bother me at a subtle level.
I look forward to him interacting with other characters more comprehensively. Thanks for the chapter
A perfect execution of Show, Not Tell. The writing is very concise. It gives a lot of information and details in very few word. Your writing is very brief but comprehensive. I'm jealous of your diverse choice of words and the knowledge on how to use them. You write these scenes masterfully, like when he calls or mentions someone, you either know that character through the original medium or if you don't, you can derive from his writing what kind of character they are. Your style of writing makes this story very interesting. I know this is my second review, but when the double digit chapters were released, I saw a different side of your writing that I previously overlooked. A mastery in Show, Not Tell, a very concise writing. Brief but comprehensive. I couldn't not write this. Thank you for this wonderful story and I look forward for more.
Dude, some angst and drama were there to build up his back story and character. After that, it's pretty chill.
Thanks for the chapter. There isn't a lot of potential in the Baki part of this world since he's pretty strong and it will become monotonous. So I'm looking forward to the next arc.
A F√CKING MASTERPIECE IN THE MAKING!!!! The writing is impeccable, it's not too descriptive nor to short, it was just right. Like it was written by a professional author. A happy surprise to see in this site named Webnovel, especially in the Fan Fic section. The story and character of this Book is amazing. Especially the character, his traits is consistent and has a solid personality. So him just changing or amplifying some part of his personality makes it even more have impact. The world he is in is pretty solid. The merging of other stories into this one world is consistent. It feels right. I have nothing to complain about, it is a solid story. I hope more chapters come out. Have a great day, take care and good luck.
Thanks for the great chapter. I'll wait 5 days for the next one but it's worth it. Keep up the good work. Good luck and take care.
Tyranny of Steel is a good one. A military constructor dies in the middle east just before the retreat of the army, gets reincarnated as a son of noble in 14 to 15 hundreds Germany. Just from the title, you'll know the gist of it. Technology, kingdom building. It's one of the best kingdom building novel I'm reading. It has harem, but it also delves after the romance part, it tackles relationship between wives, raising children and stuff. From all the actions in this story, that little aspect made this novels previous impression have much more impact. Also, Mediterranean Hegemon of Ancient Greece. It's a Chinese translated novel but it doesn't really affect it that much. There are Good TL groups that translated this to a top notch quality. The only Chinese references that you'll get from the top of my head would be at the first few chapters where there are food dishes with Chinese name that the mc recreated. Then it will seldom happen. The first arc would be to escape the enemy empire with his mercenary group and mc asserting Dominance in the group, after that, it would be kingdom building time. MC is just a history geek so he don't know how to make guns or something to rule the world, he just knows simple medieval ancient technology that can bring some advantage to his empire. So probably no flying airplanes and tanks.
Think on the bright side, your story is so good that they felt it's too short and the chapter ended quickly. Anyway, have a nice day.
It's meh. He has system that serves everything in a silver platter. He summons people from the system. He gets rewarded easily from quests. The writing quality is good but the concept and story itself is meh. It's like a shounen story but without the struggle and action and more plot armour and OPness.
You're right that they should not repost without permission. But you can't expect people to follow basic etiquette on the internet. He should have had reposted it himself. I discovered this story from a repost here in webnovel years ago.