Pretty awesome. Highly recommend! Aside from my first reaction on using the name and personality of other characters from different franchise. It was smooth. I quickly adapted to it. Author used characters from different stories but only kept their look and personality, they also fit in the world. However, there are some minor contradictions in technology that bother me at a subtle level.
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There is something bothering me when reading this novel at a subconscious level. It feels like it's missing something. Like what some dude said, everybody is a main character in their own world or perspective. To me, it seems that your characters are like cardboard cutouts. Like it only exist to help the characters. That's their only purpose. You shouldn't have put too many characters in.