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Oussama_Jaafar

Oussama_Jaafar

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Your run in a mill guy who loves reading.

2019-10-06 JoinedMorocco
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar3d
    Posted

    Hello Author-dono! I absolutely loved "Transmigrated into one piece with a gift pack" I'm looking forward to your new fanfiction![img=exp]

    I can transmigrate into the World of Anime
    Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar4d
    Commented

    Dude just got thrown straight to nightmare difficulty lol.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Beginning
    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7d
    Commented

    Apologies, it appears this is not my cup of tea.

    Ch 13 A High-Stakes Wager
    Fate/DC Universe
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7d
    Commented

    No offense but you shouldn't have gone with the genderbender business.

    Ch 4 Revelations and Transformation
    Fate/DC Universe
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7d
    Commented

    I was under the impression that it was a template system, not whatever this monstrosity of a system is...

    Ch 3 Freedom ?
    Fate/DC Universe
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar16d
    Commented

    That question could have probably saved him a lot of detours later if he had used it wisely.

    Ch 3 Preparations
    Trials of the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Slayer_King_One
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar1mth
    Commented

    Harems almost always ruin a good fanfiction.

    Ch 214 Harem or Not?
    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar3mth
    Commented

    I would suggest Ko-fi.

    Ch 153 A/N: Request
    Multiverse's Ghost Rider
    Movies · TheMightyZeus
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar3mth
    Commented

    Dude you were going so good till you added lookism, just stick to Baki and Kengan and drop lookism. it's getting tedious.

    Ch 189 Chapter 181
    Path to Strength
    Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar3mth
    Commented

    What's the point of giving him a powerful cheat if it's not gonna make him at least somewhat special?

    Ch 95 NGJ Chapter 95: Atelophobia
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar4mth
    Commented

    This is not for me, too spineless. bye.

    Ch 10 Arriving at New York Sanctum
    In Marvel with Greatest System
    Movies · Boring_World
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar5mth
    Commented

    The house doesn't fit his personality.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
    HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]
    Book&Literature · BoOk_LoV3r_429
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar6mth
    Commented

    You did well making the MC sentimental instead of the cold and opportunistic MCs that are more common. I would suggest to tone down the sentimentality a bit though, it kinda makes him look a bit whiny but that's just my opinion...

    Ch 54 It's not a chapter, but rather a note! (Regarding the story - I'M NOT DROPPING IT!)
    Streamer in the Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar6mth
    Commented

    Definitely Black Clover, i feel like there are no good ones out there.

    Ch 167 Update
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar6mth
    Commented

    He's not gonna be 100% goody two shoes right?

    Ch 5 Becoming The Monster of Mobile
    Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode
    Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar6mth
    Commented

    Anything but another reincarnator dude😑

    [You see, I realized that the world that Jin visits would be a breeze for him as his strength is already OP. So, I decided to add a challenge and a spice in his next world which is the Hotel Transylvania world. I decided to add an oc reincarnator that would obviously be his enemy.]
    Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer
    Movies · SlimeSage
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar8mth
    Commented

    Yes, walk right into a telepath den why don't ya...

    Ch 6 Meeting The Team
    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar8mth
    Commented

    The dialogue is too green...

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 "Two People From Two Different Schools"
    Spotted By Grindelwald And Went To Hogwarts
    Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar8mth
    Commented

    If you had put your MC in the timeline before Mikoto and Kushina got married maybe you would have more leeway in getting them but now it's impossible to do so without ruining your story for good.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: thoughts of bringing the dead back to life
    Naruto World with a Simulation System
    Anime & Comics · souryourer
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar8mth
    Commented

    The romance part was ehh but everything else was spot on my friend.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Hogwarts
    HP: The Gray Sorcerer
    Anime & Comics · Abyssuit
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