you should have made it into a template rather than just brain.

Did he just blurt out his greatest secret? Yeah no i'm out.

Look let's keep it real, it's one hell of a story for those who are into the dark themes of sides, a bit too realistic for my taste tho but still it's gem.

It's really good but kinda too realistic tbh.

Relinquishing his soul to a demon for the sake of power, broke the the only taboo in my book, never sell your soul because that's a level beyond stupidity.

Same for you too brother!

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Dude just got thrown straight to nightmare difficulty lol.

Apologies, it appears this is not my cup of tea.

No offense but you shouldn't have gone with the genderbender business.

I was under the impression that it was a template system, not whatever this monstrosity of a system is...

That question could have probably saved him a lot of detours later if he had used it wisely.

Harems almost always ruin a good fanfiction.

I would suggest Ko-fi.

Dude you were going so good till you added lookism, just stick to Baki and Kengan and drop lookism. it's getting tedious.

What's the point of giving him a powerful cheat if it's not gonna make him at least somewhat special?

This is not for me, too spineless. bye.

The house doesn't fit his personality.

You did well making the MC sentimental instead of the cold and opportunistic MCs that are more common. I would suggest to tone down the sentimentality a bit though, it kinda makes him look a bit whiny but that's just my opinion...

Definitely Black Clover, i feel like there are no good ones out there.