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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
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    The Author obviously deletes reviews to make up for its generic fantasy anime story with lifeless harem girls and generic magic system. No point in even paying for chapters since its just basically the same as every other novel

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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to Reesescups

    We should become friends. I am a dude with to much time hating on garbage novels. And you are a dude who with to much time defending garbage novels. I think this could be wonderful. I am joker and you will be batman.

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    Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to TMFT

    If you really think that the only way someone can get isekaid is by getting hit by a freaking truck, then you are the idiot. You basically proved my point that the author obviously did not think outside of the box and due to lazy writing just kept the generic: "Well, a truck hit me".

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    Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to tortle

    Wow he even deleted my comment.

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    Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
    Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to invayne

    I read up to chapter "fusion magic" and just to see what else happens I skipped to the evolution chapter. I do not think that my review was dishonest though. The way it starts is like any other anime / lightnovel (dieing in an accident, reborn as a baby, overprotective and loving mother, basic mana and magic) and the way its written is just 1-dimensional (only A-plot without any actual goal) combined with way to much useless info. The Brother-Sister relationship.. you know with the "handsome brother" is also quite forced. I didnt feel anything when the protag asked if she was being a nuisance to her brother and the brother gave that obvious answer. And... the typical rich-noble-ignorant bully... And as I said, there is no real goal that just grabs my attention. Fighting the bad bad bullies, is more or less a lazy writing type for "I get stronger and will show those baddies whats up!" I might be a bit harsh with the review, but I tried to compensate that by giving 3 stars, which in my opinion was very generous. You also asked in your author notes that you want to read what we think and the fact that you delete the negative ones (probably also deleted this one) and only keep the positive ones, reflects what the story represents: A one dimensional little fantasy without any interest to improve.

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    Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    Its not bad but its not great either. Generic beginning, - development, cliche characters, a lot of info Dumping, a lot of senseless talking and description and the Monsters are basically pokemon, the spells are generic rpg spells. Most importantly: No Real Goal. The Goal to fight "the bullying of demi humans" is just lazy writing for "becoming the strongest". It has some god sides though. Its easy to read and kinda cute at some points. But I cant connect with the characters because their actions and behavior are like in most animes and the Story develops into nothing. Not mine sorry.

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    Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to Garang_Kuol

    Dont think he is deleting negative reviews. There are a lot with 3 and a few with 2 stars. Its not as bad as other novels on here like most Harem novels with 1m views and 100 ratings

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to tortle

    He also deleted my review. Seems like a frequent thing on this platform. Whats the point of reviews, if they get deleted?

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    Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
    Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to KappaKappa

    The good thing about the author is, that he at least does not delete critical reviews like most other Authors here like MyLittleBrother etc.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    This is beyond Cringe levels. Beginning was fine but after that it was a whole level of cringe and cliche. Refreshing plot and interesting characters? Guys this is the Cringe version of Highschool DxD with Vampires. Seriously, if this is "one of the best books" on this platform then I seriously doubt the quality of the books on here. + Deleting Reviews sucks

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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    Nope, could not bear it any longer. With all those 5-Star ratings, I once again got fooled, thinking this might be an interesting and well thought-through novel. But once again its one of those generic fantasy wish-fulfillment-novels. Mana, magic, "beautiful" girls (this word is being used so inflationary, that it has already lost its value), bullies, vampires. more beautiful girls... Nothing really engages me to keep going. No mystery, no goal, the MC is just plain, the magic system is just generic. Writing quality is nothing out of the ordinary. Its not terrible but not really challenging, subtle, or descriptive. Its dialogue heavy, which all results to the point, where the reader can just skim through. I don't really see any reason, for me personally, to keep going. If you enjoy generic animes-inspired stories, then this is for you.

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    Magic System in a Parallel World
    Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Commented

    Its the pyramide phone from saber?

    Searching my pocket I took out a triangle object.
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    Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer
    Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    Tried it. Didnt like it. There are some grammar issues, but I dont really care about grammar, as long as it doesnt hinder the reading flow. Yet the sentences dont flow. Other than that there are no important details, which the author highlights. It just progresses without emphasizing something important. Its like a lack of momentum. Its hard to describe. What I can say for sure is the lack of thought and depth in this novel. Its once again one of those wish-fulfillment novels mixed with Animes. This is not a bad thing, since there is a loyal audience for this on webnovel. However the rushed "story" and the lack of details just determines a obvious end-going for this novel: The reader is going to get bored by it. Harem-stories can be good. But not like that. Sorry.

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    Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
    Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Replied to jugglessAzureSky

    Thank you for your effort and your sacrifice.

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    My Rich Wife
    Urban · Taibai And A Qin
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    You dont really need my review to notice how bad the writing is. I dont want to sound harsh, but when I see a novel with 10+ 5 Star Ratings combined with this writing, I just cant hold my self back. Its not only the grammar which can be bearable in a lot of novels. Its the sentence length + structure. Its like the author tries to break his own record, on how long he can make a sentence. Fortunately, the author did improve the writing on later chapters a bit. However there is still this one thing that the author cant just improve easily like that; Dialogue. Its not only robotic, or way to frequent, its also just really badly written.

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    Unrivaled Under The Heaven
    Eastern · flamezdoa
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    Besides the fact their is a lot of room for improvement when it comes to writing, or describing a scene properly, I see very little Story in this Story... its more of the typical wishfullfilment mixed with Anime. I liked the idea and thought it would be a mixed of adventure and family Relation but After reading just 5 chapters I can see that there is minimal point in depth both in terms of character and Progression.

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    My Daughter is a Vampire
    Sci-fi · Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    I had no clue what I was reading. The story was all over the place... Wait or was it prologue? Or Just Explanation? I dont know. It was just weird. The more I read the more I got confused by whatever this was. And just ctrl + f and type in "King".

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    Move To another PF
    Fantasy · Febyola_Manoppo
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    Well.. its just meh. The Development and Char design is not really visible in the first chapters. Some might say that this is a bit rushed as a review but I couldnt stand the writing of the novel. Its just ... plain. No engaging or writing with depth. The only thing remarkable is the excessive use of exclamation mark. However if you want to read a story just because you are bored and you dont want to think about it too much, then this might be actually nice, because it progresses nicely.

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    My Enchanting System
    Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    A true hidden gem and a masterpiece. The MC is the chaddiest cheddar that you could imagine. Just in the first few chapters he has already conquered and impregnated every girl in the book and he is so sigma kappa lambda male that he even hit every girl in every other book on WN, while killing and slaughtering every other male that comes close to him. For what reason? Cuz he can? Duh? His system is unique and fresh because thats the only system novel I have read so far.

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    System for Dummies
    Fantasy · Fearmongering
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  • KappaKappa
    KappaKappa1yr
    Posted

    Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion. Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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