Review Detail of KappaKappa in Unrivaled Under The Heaven

You dont really need my review to notice how bad the writing is. I dont want to sound harsh, but when I see a novel with 10+ 5 Star Ratings combined with this writing, I just cant hold my self back. Its not only the grammar which can be bearable in a lot of novels. Its the sentence length + structure. Its like the author tries to break his own record, on how long he can make a sentence. Fortunately, the author did improve the writing on later chapters a bit. However there is still this one thing that the author cant just improve easily like that; Dialogue. Its not only robotic, or way to frequent, its also just really badly written.