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Review Detail of KappaKappa in Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System

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KappaKappa
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Its not bad but its not great either. Generic beginning, - development, cliche characters, a lot of info Dumping, a lot of senseless talking and description and the Monsters are basically pokemon, the spells are generic rpg spells. Most importantly: No Real Goal. The Goal to fight "the bullying of demi humans" is just lazy writing for "becoming the strongest". It has some god sides though. Its easy to read and kinda cute at some points. But I cant connect with the characters because their actions and behavior are like in most animes and the Story develops into nothing. Not mine sorry.

Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System

invayne

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invayne
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Did you even read the novel? because it doesn't sound like you did.

TMFT
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Kappa is such a generic human

KappaKappa
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I read up to chapter "fusion magic" and just to see what else happens I skipped to the evolution chapter. I do not think that my review was dishonest though. The way it starts is like any other anime / lightnovel (dieing in an accident, reborn as a baby, overprotective and loving mother, basic mana and magic) and the way its written is just 1-dimensional (only A-plot without any actual goal) combined with way to much useless info. The Brother-Sister relationship.. you know with the "handsome brother" is also quite forced. I didnt feel anything when the protag asked if she was being a nuisance to her brother and the brother gave that obvious answer. And... the typical rich-noble-ignorant bully... And as I said, there is no real goal that just grabs my attention. Fighting the bad bad bullies, is more or less a lazy writing type for "I get stronger and will show those baddies whats up!" I might be a bit harsh with the review, but I tried to compensate that by giving 3 stars, which in my opinion was very generous. You also asked in your author notes that you want to read what we think and the fact that you delete the negative ones (probably also deleted this one) and only keep the positive ones, reflects what the story represents: A one dimensional little fantasy without any interest to improve.

invayne:Did you even read the novel? because it doesn't sound like you did.
Reesescups
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Kappa is such a generic bully with too much time on their hands seeking attention by leaving negative comments everywhere and can’t find anything they enjoy

TMFT
TMFTLv2TMFT

Dude is complaining about how the MC died in an Isekai novel? What an idiot

KappaKappa:I read up to chapter "fusion magic" and just to see what else happens I skipped to the evolution chapter. I do not think that my review was dishonest though. The way it starts is like any other anime / lightnovel (dieing in an accident, reborn as a baby, overprotective and loving mother, basic mana and magic) and the way its written is just 1-dimensional (only A-plot without any actual goal) combined with way to much useless info. The Brother-Sister relationship.. you know with the "handsome brother" is also quite forced. I didnt feel anything when the protag asked if she was being a nuisance to her brother and the brother gave that obvious answer. And... the typical rich-noble-ignorant bully... And as I said, there is no real goal that just grabs my attention. Fighting the bad bad bullies, is more or less a lazy writing type for "I get stronger and will show those baddies whats up!" I might be a bit harsh with the review, but I tried to compensate that by giving 3 stars, which in my opinion was very generous. You also asked in your author notes that you want to read what we think and the fact that you delete the negative ones (probably also deleted this one) and only keep the positive ones, reflects what the story represents: A one dimensional little fantasy without any interest to improve.
KappaKappa
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If you really think that the only way someone can get isekaid is by getting hit by a freaking truck, then you are the idiot. You basically proved my point that the author obviously did not think outside of the box and due to lazy writing just kept the generic: "Well, a truck hit me".

TMFT:Dude is complaining about how the MC died in an Isekai novel? What an idiot
KappaKappa
KappaKappaLv1KappaKappa

We should become friends. I am a dude with to much time hating on garbage novels. And you are a dude who with to much time defending garbage novels. I think this could be wonderful. I am joker and you will be batman.

Reesescups:Kappa is such a generic bully with too much time on their hands seeking attention by leaving negative comments everywhere and can’t find anything they enjoy