Besides the fact their is a lot of room for improvement when it comes to writing, or describing a scene properly, I see very little Story in this Story... its more of the typical wishfullfilment mixed with Anime. I liked the idea and thought it would be a mixed of adventure and family Relation but After reading just 5 chapters I can see that there is minimal point in depth both in terms of character and Progression.
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