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Review Detail of KappaKappa in Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

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Tried it. Didnt like it. There are some grammar issues, but I dont really care about grammar, as long as it doesnt hinder the reading flow. Yet the sentences dont flow. Other than that there are no important details, which the author highlights. It just progresses without emphasizing something important. Its like a lack of momentum. Its hard to describe. What I can say for sure is the lack of thought and depth in this novel. Its once again one of those wish-fulfillment novels mixed with Animes. This is not a bad thing, since there is a loyal audience for this on webnovel. However the rushed "story" and the lack of details just determines a obvious end-going for this novel: The reader is going to get bored by it. Harem-stories can be good. But not like that. Sorry.

Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

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