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Kont_Archimedes

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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes22d
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    This novel is completely mediocre. I respect the idea of ​​writing your own novel inspired by another novel, but this is literally plagiarism!! Everything, down to the dialogues, has been stolen from similar versions of the genre. The plot, the characters, the dialogues, everything... I'm surprised you have the face to shamelessly upload this here.

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    I Am The Destiny Villain
    Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes3mth
    Posted

    Another novel in which a powerful 'general' who has lived for years acts like a whiny retardd child after being reincarnated. Author if you're going to write a main character acting like an dumpp, don't give him a background story like this

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    Villain Of The Ages
    Eastern · Ryan_Saga
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes4mth
    Commented

    The cliché father route. What makes you think it makes sense for someone 3 years older than you to be someone else's father? A rich brat who hasn't even come of age is going to be someone else's father? It wouldn't look so weird if he said she'll grow up to be part of my harem.

    Ch 5 (5) One protagonist and two female leads
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    Transmigration: To become the greatest of villain
    Urban · To_not_lose
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes8mth
    Commented

    It's weird, it seems to me that Danzo interrogated him a bit inadequately, or because you didn't explain it clearly, so now there are unanswered questions. This guy told them everything about the future and no one asked him how he knew all this? If he can tell them memories of naruto in his past life, shouldn't they find out that he's a trasmigrator? If they found out about his past, didn't they ask him how he knows so much fuinjutsu? How much did he reveal about himself, not just the future, under Danzo's influence? Did he mention that he has a system? Obviously no one is paying enough attention to him. Danzo's supposed to take all the information, record it, and investigate every little detail, and he just drops by every now and then and asks questions?! He told the guy that he will die in the future, right? That aside, if someone who knew the future showed up, wouldn't you scramble for any information you could get out of him? I expected to read this in the simulation, but you ignore writing their reaction like programmed NPCs and just use the simulation as Mc's grinding tool. Yes yes root will make it stronger than before, what an unexpected result!

    Ch 56 7th Simulation! Part 4
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    Naruto: A Broken Dream
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes8mth
    Replied to Hidden_Moon

    My personal opinion is that both have their good sides. Here at least Mc has a firm and decisive attitude. He has emotions (a little psycho). That's good for me. But on the other hand there is not enough depth in the characters. Supporting characters etc. You have to try not to make them one-dimensional. Especially as the realms rise in power scale. And yes the first chs could polish - character interactions). Plus I don't have a problem with it but you can definitely be criticized for creating such a psycho Mc in 10 chs and completely killing his character development.

    Ch 10 Golden Light Sect Disciples
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    Infinite Rebirth System
    Eastern · Hidden_Moon
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes8mth
    Commented

    I have a feeling that Chen Feng will be the cause of Xiao Ye's death 😄

    Ch 10 Golden Light Sect Disciples
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    Infinite Rebirth System
    Eastern · Hidden_Moon
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes9mth
    Replied to Hidden_Moon

    Nah, nothing afraid here. It just shows the cruelty of this world. Of course, that makes the story a little darker. Any case It's your choice whether to do or not...

    Li Zhenyu and Zhang Hu walked away, laughing and mocking them. They left Liu Lan and Xiao Ye lying on the ground, bleeding and bruised.
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    Infinite Rebirth System
    Eastern · Hidden_Moon
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes9mth
    Commented

    It seems they are principled villains. Normally in Chinese stories, they don't have this attitude towards defenseless girls. "Hey little girl come here and play with this uncle, If I like your taste I may think let go you two..."

    Li Zhenyu and Zhang Hu walked away, laughing and mocking them. They left Liu Lan and Xiao Ye lying on the ground, bleeding and bruised.
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    Infinite Rebirth System
    Eastern · Hidden_Moon
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes9mth
    Commented

    Okay, not gonna lie, I think you're throwing some bs now. In the simulation where Orochimaru killed him, what was missing that he got Sannin's attention but not Danzo's? Obviously he was there more to develop his power in plain sight. There's a Danzo plot in every Naruto ff so I'm no stranger to it but now his unplanned appearance screams 'forced plot!'

    Ch 34 Training! Day 7
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    Naruto: A Broken Dream
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes9mth
    Commented

    expp

    Ch 53 DAY 53
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    EXP-Cultivation
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes9mth
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 52 DAY 52
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    EXP-Cultivation
    Anime & Comics · Lucien_Renley
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 1141 Chapter 1140
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    Great exp book
    Book&Literature · XeternityXIII
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Replied to Kont_Archimedes

    exp

    Ch 1140 Chapter 1139
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    Great exp book
    Book&Literature · XeternityXIII
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 1140 Chapter 1139
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    Great exp book
    Book&Literature · XeternityXIII
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Commented

    +1

    C) Conquer the heroines
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    I'm The Villain? I will Live As I Want
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Replied to Mr_Akilllies

    He can take different races and fuse them with his own race. And he can train their powers more easily. instead of taking it out of the system every time. Still, I think the title is a bit deceptive. Thanks for the comment I will think about it 🤔

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    Rise of the Hollow [Hiatus]
    Anime & Comics · Kont_Archimedes
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Replied to Mr_Akilllies

    It's not much for now, but he'll only need it when he's not a simple Hollow. He also needs a place to put the items in the shop.

    - [>Inventory<] >{ Locked }<
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    Rise of the Hollow [Hiatus]
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Replied to Hades306

    He had a bit of spiritual energy before he transformed into the Hollow, so I wanted to point out that his actually 'traveled' during the transformation. From Demi-Hollow to - Hollow. In short, he fused with him when he was at his weakest moment.

    [Heh, finally we're being rude. Anyway, don't ask everything one by one, listen to my explanation. Your soul fused with me when you died. Actually, I looked for a suitable placement for you but I couldn't find one. There were some, but if I had placed you there would have been a strong backlash and there might not have been much left of you. Actually, it was also because I didn't have enough energy... Anyway, that's why I had to synchronize your soul with a human with low self-awareness who had just turned into a new hollow. (A/n: demi-Hollow) For the last question, yes, as you can see from your memories, this is the universe of the anime 'Bleach' and you are a low-level hollow.]
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    Rise of the Hollow [Hiatus]
    Anime & Comics · Kont_Archimedes
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Replied to strelking
    Ch 6 Mass Hunt
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    Rise of the Hollow [Hiatus]
    Anime & Comics · Kont_Archimedes
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  • Kont_Archimedes
    Kont_Archimedes1yr
    Replied to Nogitsune96

    No, I understand. Before I explain one by one, I want to mention one thing. Since not many chapters have been published, it's normal to have questions about the system or Mc's personality, etc. Story doesn't have a fast pace. That's why I'm showing most of the things with Mc. These things will be clear before the first arc is over. You can be sure. What you say about the evolutionary process of Menos is true. They're a new kind of hollow that was formed from hundreds of hollow clusters after cannibalism. But that's not what I'm talking about here. You're thinking of Mc's hollow evolution like in the Bleach anime. He's a hollow with a system. So you don't have to worry about his personality or his will being weak or being swallowed by other souls. His evolution process will be different. If you want, you can just see it as an increase in the spiritual reserves that he has, that's fine with me. About system, system is just using souls as energy. He is not a hollow! Souls don't accumulate inside her. I don't think I designed the system badly. I adjusted it for most of the things that can happen. I just think I didn't introduce his features more, there's too much confusion, I'll make a separate chapter for sytem details. And I think it is ridiculous for you to see my Mc as the worst Hollow Mc. There are Hollow Mc's with systems on this site. They get tasks from their systems. They evolve as long as they complete the condition. Do you think these Hollow Mc's are so great? Or do you not care about the problems you mentioned? If you compare it to normal Hollow Mc's, I can understand, but calling it the worst is very biased.

    [Host has nothing to worry about that. As I discussed with you at the beginning, this system uses souls a fuel. So it's still possible for me to reconnect with you as long as my lost energy is compensated. For some time after I am gone, it will be possible to suppress your hollow instincts, even at a minimum level, and the system will continue to work normally. But you will no longer be able to benefit from any of the system's functions.]
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    Rise of the Hollow [Hiatus]
    Anime & Comics · Kont_Archimedes
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