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the synopsis is really good, it's catchy. when it comes to the story as it is, the first few chapters feel rather heavy and overwhelming, the characters feel a bit plain too, but with the development of the story they start gaining volume and become for tridimensional. overall it is a good story. though i would have loved to see distributing details more evenly throughout the story and catching little details later on, rather than being told how the characters are right away. keep it up
Nice.... YOU ACTUALLY USED THE SPANISH PROPERLY!!
this one IS well conjugated
it's not really well conjugated, it would be "Casa escondite" or "Casa escondida" esconder is the base form of the verb .
casa esconder is in spanish right???