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Like damn. I don't know what to even say. The writing quality is top notch, it creates very vivid images in your mind like a movie. The stability of updates is great also, more than one a day? I couldn't do that. I never thought I could picture such gruesome scenes in my head of what happened. Its true people really don't understand what people have to deal with on that kind of terrain. Its not excitement but fear. An anxiety that is instilled in your bones and lasts for many years after. I think this story has great potential!
Writing this as of Chapter 19 being published. The beginning of the story isn't going to be grand, it's the main character learning and mastering some spells. After the a few more chapters is where things start to get spicy. Blood, competition, love, criminals, power. Everything you could hope in a book starts a little later. I just wanted to establish the main character and make him be able to stand on the same stage as the power houses.
Missing the speech thing
The first chapter gives us all the information we need to understand the story. This year especially I have been more into this genre of story so I quite enjoyed being set up for what is to come. While the writing feels a little choppy, it is still of good quality and won't hinder you unless you are a big time critique. This story has potential to be really high up on the ranking and I hope the author continues to deliver wonderful chapters for us!
You used His face back to back
You used confirmed twice in the same paragraph, which isn't the end of the world.
SAO vibes lol
Like damn. I don't know what to even say. The writing quality is top notch, it creates very vivid images in your mind like a movie. The stability of updates is great also, more than one a day? I couldn't do that. I never thought I could picture such gruesome scenes in my head of what happened. Its true people really don't understand what people have to deal with on that kind of terrain. Its not excitement but fear. An anxiety that is instilled in your bones and lasts for many years after. I think this story has great potential!
Boy is this the story for you. It has not only what we want but what we need. Secrecy, sub-races, a new world never to be seen again....and most importantly, a MC who will do whatever he can to rise to the top! I recommend this to everyone!
I loved the first chapter, it reminded me a lot of SAO. Honestly I missed reading something as refreshing as this. If you are looking for a good story, this is where its at!
No good points to offer at the beginning of the adventure? That means there will be something in store for that class later on in the story. Very clever you sneaky goose.
Reminds me a little of SAO. A wave of nostalgia hit me lol
The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.