Do not disturb
Its honestly disappointing. The MC here is nothing but a weak ass shit who hides his powers. I mean, you could've solved your problem from the very start if you had shown them a glimps of your powers. This would've been a better story if that actually happened.
To be honest, I'm very disappointed with this. It started of great but then all hell break loose. The story had a lot of potential but man the author lacks so much imagination it sucks. Even the world building and the flashbacks, seems so confusing that its like tossing new information one after the other with no proper introduction of who it was or a depiction of that scene to imagine in a bit more clearly. And to the topic at hand of the lack of imagination, why have I said that? He had spell creation and created an item box skill and all that but he never thought of creating a disguise skill? Not to mention even the skill he has seems off to me, with that type of skill "skill creation" you can just create a skill that sucks in mana to from the surroundings constantly and have a spare back up to store it to have near unlimited mana in you. Even the plot itself sucks. The revenge thing works a bit even if was like a "meh" kind of thing but after that it was just collecting women. Its like collecting women like pokemon from then on.
As much as I would like to comment so many details for this novel let me just summarize it by telling that I have nothing good to say to this novel.
The premise of the story seems fine but the execution seems like ah "meh" type of story. I find it so wasteful to spend this type of system in that type of method. If you had the power to gain something every time you die why not just rush to a place like a "Forbidden Mountain" or something where mortality rate is so high that you die just by being there which every cultivation novel have in any Genre. You can just stay trapped there and die so many times that you become so OP and just stop dying when your strong enough to resist what is making people die there.
Story is great, character growth is great, world building is great, etc. I don't think its caught up with it here but with the actual current chapters, I do like to point out that its disappointing that he took so much chapters in the Dark World and Blood World. I cant speak for other readers but for me, the blood arc with the blood god clone seems too long. People came here for something that he may be able to use in public. Except for his recovery an some factors, most of his gains in the blood world with all those "blood" skills, moves, body constitution, etc. would be completely useless if he fights in public. In those chapters from 1700 - 2000 he could have transitioned quickly to a higher level but and went back quickly. I see no point of him staying too long in the blood world in the long run.
The story is great and all that along with the concept of it. The progress of the characters seems fine for me but the only that's a minus for me is that, I don't know it this is just me but I usually get confused on which world they are in. It would've been more helpful if you could stick to one world first before going to the next and not going back and forth. A not so much minus for me is the DXD section. I don't understand the point of adding that section since it doesn't that much excitement for me you know. It would've been more helpful if there we're parts where the OG characters in DXD like Rias, Issei, Vali, etc. could compare themselves to the MC or the FLs. Making him the successor of the Biblical God destroyed the DXD arc for me.
It was an enjoyable story especially in the beginning but the longer it went on it became more and more boring since the cycle keeps repeating on the events. I could have been fine with that, what threw me of is the harem collecting pokemon thing. You do know that doing this ruins the essence of potential romance in the novel. You're just collecting them all and at some point one or two of the FL causing it to ruin the story.
The premise of the story is good but it lacks the essence. The progress seemed so pointless that I was so bored after reading 50 chapters. I mean what's the point of all this Dawn Sect? I get the Godfather thing but what's the end goal? And accounting the fact that the detectives seem to suck since any detective would've figured out who that Godfather is after a month or 2 especially the proclaimed good detective sister. This could have been a better story if it contained a bit like the detective essence found in Death Note or Detective Conan.
Read up till 100+ and it sucks. I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.
So slow paced. The story keeps rotating on the same pattern over and over again with no visible improvement with the MC. Its just s*x and face slapping over and over again. It's still slightly better than other novels but still, it could have been better.
what a weird story. The MC has no knowledge whatsoever how to handle money. Every damn cliche is present in the story along with the fact its useless keeping that amount of money if you can't manage it properly. Every business is handled by someone very qualified then its suddenly handed to someone who has no background in business, no family background, not even enough level of intellect to back it up. No matter what path I imagine I can already tell that it wont end well for him.
Started of great but went downhill from chapter 250+. He forgot he killed poseidon and others, he got stagnant with his power so there was no more growth and from 250 till 500 its all just provoke retaliate provoke retaliate.. it goes on and on. The story seems meaningless and with no growth of the MC it became very boring. Even the interactions between the MC and the others seem ridiculously stupid. A powerful 19 to 20 year old man with, according to the novel, had a powerful mental strength but had nothing in mind other than to fight and kill without thinking about the consequences. He makes enemies like he is breathing with no thought of what would happen to Annie. Such a great disappointment.
Undoubtedly the most ridiculous novel I've read. I've encountered so many people who did something that ruined their novel but this by far is the greatest. The story was great so far up until the MC reaches the Upper Realm. By then its just like how the story starting from the very beginning. What's irritating about it as well is the fact that nearly EVERYTHING IS THE SAME. The only difference is the names but every event that transpired, every encounters, every disciple, etc. It was just a different name but all of it was the same. The audacity of this Author. I've encountered lazy authors with lazy writings and bad grammar but that would be more tolerable that this novel.
Back TO the future
Dear Author, your novel has some great potential but the thing is, its too inconsistent. The attitude of your MC portrays so differently depending on the situation. Its very disappointing, and annoying at that to see something who's gone to worlds just to find a satisfying enemy and then display such weak powers like that in the novel. If it were based on what the story had gone through the MC could have erased the tower in just one snap, his killing intent would've overwhelmed the enemy, not to mention the move he would be doing would probably be like training the kid for him to defeat the MC one day or something. Just please find a characteristic for the MC and stick with it.
The story, execution and everything else is fine although I rated it as 3.6 since it was a bit slow paced for me. It doesn't really hype me up much but I do recommend this if you are a casual reader who likes to chill.
Wouldn't be that difficult? Are you telling me that Avatar has someone that can match up with Acnologia with people just throwing rocks, air, water o fire? Not to mention Fairy Tail includes Irene Belserion along with August Dragneel. Are you telling me that Avatar is scarier than any of these three characters?
Sorry but I dont like the story. It so stupid its hard to not cringe everytime I read. He was born a son of super OP parents so he should have been able to level up easily. It was even mentioned that he visited so many galaxies and even went back in time so I was assuming that he had leveled up so fast because of those travels but no. You can even add the fact that he has a system and unlimited mana. I cant imagine how trash can an MC be to not get strong fast with those perks. The infinite mana alone could've made him an OP one in just a few chapters even if he was born as a commoner yet he was a child of 2 of the most powerful beings yet he was still trash? Oh come on, really?
Cant you just make a made up mutant that he would meet wherein people judged the mutant for, well being mutant but the mutant did not discover his/her powers yet when MC meets him/her he discovers that the mutant has magic immunity or anti magic powers?