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Dear Author, your novel has some great potential but the thing is, its too inconsistent. The attitude of your MC portrays so differently depending on the situation. Its very disappointing, and annoying at that to see something who's gone to worlds just to find a satisfying enemy and then display such weak powers like that in the novel. If it were based on what the story had gone through the MC could have erased the tower in just one snap, his killing intent would've overwhelmed the enemy, not to mention the move he would be doing would probably be like training the kid for him to defeat the MC one day or something. Just please find a characteristic for the MC and stick with it.

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Your Not So Ordinary Villain

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Thanks for the insight and I'll try my best to improve the story. 😊😊