Rish_madara
Extremely derivative and bland background for the story. I couldn’t finish even the 5th chapter because it constantly tries to copy Solo Leveling or other more original power fantasy leveling novels. Writing quality is not good to say the least. At some points making it feel like a badly translated clone of Solo Leveling, which I could at least tolerate if I liked the premise and thought it could change to be different in an aspect from the standard. However; it does not deviate from the formula and could use an editor and much better introduction that can get the reader to stay for the development of the characters and storyline. As it is, the idea is uninspired and the writing is worse. For context, I immediately dropped any desire to read further after the decision to pick the daggers for the hunter test. Especially after the detail about the shadow making me think that this was just a Solo leveling fanfic.
ive read a few chapters, and its got a lot of potential, the only problem is the writing quality imo, the descriptions of every action seems almost bland and monotone, it kinda kills the excitement for me. really great backstory for the character should you go more into detail with it. like I said though, it has a lot of potential to be good.
Personally I like the storyline, but please also pay attention to the development of other characters who will help Kang-Ho, and whats no less important needs romance so that the nuance isn't too dark, even though the initial design is "hell" but occasionally there is a rainbow color is good too, right?, unfortunately it seems like it took a long chaps to know that, and I'm currently at chap 92, so far it hasn't been a disappointment to me, so good work ...
The story had a cliche plot from the beginning but that's generally okay. Good plots are used over and over because people like them. My issue was terrible writing quality and an insensible amount of plot armor. There's far too little world background, and our main character seemingly caught up to people with a 2 year head start in like 4 chapters. Now he's participating in world events he shouldn't be strong enough to touch. Entire guilds. These people should vastly out level him.
The biggest issue with this story is that every enemy he faces happens to have an uncontrollable rage that makes them completely stupid and kill their own allies. Not just one or two people, but almost every enemy with a name has this issue. The story is not bad, but the people are rather poorly written personality wise (the sister is also way too childish and naive. I do not see how old she is, but the author was laying the sweet little sister way too thick). Side note: There is another issue with grammar. There are a ton of small errors, but the story is readable as a whole
I would like to the author for increasing my ability to read jumbled words. I can guess what mostly the words are supposed to be in this translation. I can actually follow the story, but at the cost of rereading certain passages. Story is good, but you got it on hard mode to read. I would not recommend the audio version, even though I have not attempted to try to. I bet it sounds horrid 😂😂😂
Illogical and cliché, this novel doesn't bother with developing a world that makes any sense. The characters are caricatures without interesting traits. The description of the fights is childish with absolutely no weight to actions, it is very clear that this author is modelling the fights after video games without ever considering what a real fight is like.