got bored on Lemon to the point on avoiding it. I prefer an actual "plot" now.
green thread? Loki?
can't their parents send item to them?
it's because it's not their Heroic Story.
it's gonna be FMA next?
wah kirain ada bahasa inggris nya, bahasa di sinopsis nya agak kaku, kukira hasil translate ke b.indo
while it's good to rank up, he should not rushed that, better for him to get another skills that can save his/his subordinates' life. and maximize his people's level first(based on current rank, should be 20), and better gears. he also haven't built the lightning tower yet, right?
use *sfx* for sound effects
can't bear to see death, but lets someone like joker alive and "well" is such a contradictive move (resulting many more deaths). he should at least lobotomize joker or something.
he had lightning fruit power, heat should not hurt him
it's okay to use powers, but it's better to be subtle and not arouses suspicion. it just comes out of nowhere and so unusual. people with a brain would know something is wrong with the situation, especially if they know each other like carol and the soldiers.
Boooo..... so cringe and unnecessary
4 chapters in, already this?
what's Angel Magic? is there such magic in FT?
they're cats. different naming standards.