ive read a few chapters, and its got a lot of potential, the only problem is the writing quality imo, the descriptions of every action seems almost bland and monotone, it kinda kills the excitement for me. really great backstory for the character should you go more into detail with it. like I said though, it has a lot of potential to be good.
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