I don't know why this is a popular start for reincarnation novels. Not crying is a sign of a lack of oxygen, which translates to the baby having brain damage

There are many problems with this book. I did not read any comments before starting, but they are mostly right. The main problem I see is that he has too much growth without any conflict. However, he is still underperforming since he is choosing not to take the side-effect free resources to level himself up for no reason. Additionally, he basically masters everything he touches in no time. All without facing any real challenges or struggles. And up at to chapter 40, there is not real mention of wizards or reason to suddenly become interested in wizards like the title suggests. As a side note, the translation is also rather poor. Spears almost always being translated as guns would be my biggest complaint on this front.

It is hard to hold interest with the lore being half baked version of the witcher and the mc being too strong for the story to be worth anything.

He knows he is being cringe the whole time but does not stop being cringe. If anything, it makes him worse. It also feels like he is just jumping to one half-baked plot point to the next and only has an arbitrary goal of making a cult for the sake of making a cult.

I am pretty sure it is fodder, not potters

Greedy through and through. Not only is the first chapter locked, the price is 3 passes. Not worth it at all. If I could rate it lower I would because I am against the price in general and it is clear that a chapter 1 price is just a sign of being greedy beyond that.

*Wolfgang was not

True, but oxygen is needed to cry, which is why it is the sign for brain damage. It does not take a lot of time before the lack of oxygen causes damage, and if they come out while not crying, it is likely they have hit that time already

MC feels incredibly dumb and childish. I could not even give it much of a try because of how bad it was. He was a college student, but seems like he only has the maturity of a 4 year old child

Reviewing at chapter 30 (current up to date). Overall, it is a decent story so far. There are a few weird parts about the development that seem strange or really important but are passed over or skipped. Especially with the whole Eve thing (you will get what I mean pretty early on). I feel like it is still early enough to where these can still be answered, but seem weird and out of place instead of mysterious or intriguing, like I suspect the author is trying for.Also, I do not like that the mc seems to be going out of his way to make people hate him, which is making things unnecessarily complicated for him. I do not mind the carefree attitude, the fast talking approach, or the thrill he seems to be getting out of challenges, but he seems to be going out of his way to make things more difficult

only read until chapers had to be unlocked, but the first 5 chapters are really slow. After that, he starts the game, but the game has no sense of balance, and 5, as level one, is competing with the top level people because of special equipment that was just given to himand is "low level equipment" but is able to ignore all defense. This is frankly mediocre at best, even though it has a slightly novel start to the game.

(Reviewed at chapter 37- currently caught up with released chapters) It is not a bad story, but there are a lot of things I think could be better. Starting with a small matter that I found annoying and moving on from there.1. There is not one time I have seen the mc think to himself. He always mutters or whispers to himself, and no one acknowledges him talking to himself even though they also have enhanced senses from becoming black iron (or higher). It really irritates me how frequently it happens.2. For such an 'evil' organization, they seem to have a lot of really great and generous perks and a pleasant city to accompany that. Not to mention the stict no policies about preventing infighting among their members, great restaurants with eye-catching staff, and the great facilities provided to all members based on contributions. It feels like the author has to remind you pretty often that they are 'evil' with a rather off handed remark. Sure, they used a parasite to force awaken the mc, but that is a really prestigious position for an individual. Sure the parasite could in theory be used to take control of the mc, but they have not even tried to yet (and he could get around the issue and even reverse it extreamly easily with a bit of time if he wanted to - which should have been his first priority if they were really as bad as they were made out to be). 3. Power levels like iron, bronze, and silver and grades like common, elite, ext. (mostly seen through plants, so it might be a bit skewed) seem to be pointless and arbitrary. He is capable of improving plants to above his level pretty much instantly, and it does not really have any repercussions. It only takes like a day, and he can do it to 3 plants.4. It feels like every time the author thinks of something cool, he wants to give it to the mc. He always is giving it to the mc instead of letting the mc earn it. Frankly, he seems overpowered for his level already, and this does not help the issue of the power levels being meaningless. And this is while he is under equipped and broke.5. I find how his team was arranged extremely awkward. The super evil organization (that is shown to be highly meticulous and efficient) decided, "Hey, you guys barely know anyone else here, but groups will be arranged based on how you guys feel. We trust you and care about your feelings." It would have been more rational to have them assigned based on people who are roomed close together to allow for more efficient communication for teams and allow the meticulousness of the organization to adjust combat groups to be balanced.6. This is kind of an idea to reign in the speed of the mc to a more reasonable - but still powerful - if the author decides to rewrite anything. It would be better to make his only gain the recovery either when he sleeps or when he meditates. He is getting way too much recovery passively, which makes him grow too fast for a well paced story.

once again, he talks under his breath without thinking to himself. It is also annoying that it happens as if no one can hear what he is saying, even with their own enhanced senses from becoming black iron

Grey is so much more low-key

Barely started and already brokenly powerful to the level there is barely any point continuing. By chapter about 3, he already can be classified as an S rank and the levels don't mean anything since he can kill things several levels above him

The hate is solely because I can not unlock any chapters for this novel, and I keep getting fast passes for it. I can't spend it since it only allows you to purchase all the chapters with coins, but I keep getting the fast passes anyway.

The story is good and really does put an immortal's view into things. One problem I have noticed is that when he uses an alias, people he does not tell his real name to call him by his real name. this happens with 2 separate groups he finds and I find it quite annoying. However, the thing I like about the book is that an immortal really just needs to wait and make improvements over time

it was under the alternate name: "fight like a girl." There are a couple of places to read it like manga here or bato.to

demons control nether which allows them to curse people. he got nether from the demon and received lessons on how to use it, so he should be able to curse people by now

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