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Review Detail of Triceratrips in The Hunter That Returned From Hell

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The story had a cliche plot from the beginning but that's generally okay. Good plots are used over and over because people like them. My issue was terrible writing quality and an insensible amount of plot armor. There's far too little world background, and our main character seemingly caught up to people with a 2 year head start in like 4 chapters. Now he's participating in world events he shouldn't be strong enough to touch. Entire guilds. These people should vastly out level him.

The Hunter That Returned From Hell

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