Review Detail of InfiniteZer0 in The Hunter That Returned From Hell

The biggest issue with this story is that every enemy he faces happens to have an uncontrollable rage that makes them completely stupid and kill their own allies. Not just one or two people, but almost every enemy with a name has this issue. The story is not bad, but the people are rather poorly written personality wise (the sister is also way too childish and naive. I do not see how old she is, but the author was laying the sweet little sister way too thick). Side note: There is another issue with grammar. There are a ton of small errors, but the story is readable as a whole