Reviews of The Author's POV

It is the best and first novel I have ever read, and to see it get completed left me in a state of nostalgia.

Great novel author - sama. I like how MC interact with Mellisa. Hope There will be bonus chapter every week [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Ahh, I wanted to drop this review a few days ago when I saw some idiot giving this story 2-star before even trying it. But I wasn't caught up with this back then. Anyway, since this book has 800+ something reviews I don't know whether someone will even read this or not lol but here goes: Writing Quality: This is one of the books that will just keep on getting better and better in terms of writing as you'll keep on advancing the chapters. What I can say is, from the start till where I have read, it just kept on getting good. Story Development: This is one of the strong point of this novel. Many of you-- and the author himself-- compare this work to The Novel's Extra, but I can surely say that while TNE started becoming slow as it progressed, The Author's POV will only get good as you will turn pages. Character Design: Since the story is in 1st PoV you will instantly feel attached to the protagonist. His actions, his thoughts, his mindset-- everything will be fleshed out to you. However, that, in no way, hinders the development or design of other characters. World Background: The novel is nearing its biggest arc and I'm actually hyped reading a wn after so long! The world is amazing and Entrail knows how to use foreshadowing to his advantage. I won't lie, this is one of the best non-harem, non-system (not at least the Protagonist), non-smut story on this site. And if the ending is done right, it could be ONE OF THE biggest hit yet.

This novel is so good that it can be 1st rank because the story line is interesting and going smoothly. This novel is my favourite. By the way the Auther is so good because if you ask him a question he will answer you.

hey bro, i wanted to that your novel has great potentiel, i know that at the first you inprired from the novel extra but i have say i love your novel better, i just hope that ou mc will not remain always in the dark, even if its intrestion and unique, i don't want him to be a forgetten, you know i recently started a novel, at my way, i was inspered by you frankly, i was hopping if i can use your world background i really love it

i just want to say this novel is good, if you find it boring in the first chapter, just bear with it later it get more interesting and make u want to read more, i will give my daily stone to this novel

Going to be honest, i've been reading a lot of webnovels ofer the year and they've eventually gone stale, not that the story wasn't good, it just wasn't fun to read anymore (for me ). Do you know what that spark that makes you anticipate the next chapter feels like ? The one that keeps you glued to the book and makes you excited to see where the storyline will go ? This reignited that in me. If you've gotten tired of litrpgs and super op mc that brute force their way through everything, getting all the glory (and the women) by barely making any effort, this book is for you. The MC is not weak, but compared to the rest of the characters, he seems like it. Nevertheless he finds out ways to turn the tides in his direction, he knows his strengths and weaknesses, he know what he can and can't do. And he's *smart*. Give it a chance, read 10 chapters and if it hasn't got you hooked by then, this isn't for you.

Definitely this novel is in my top 10. This novel here only have 5 million views but on other illegal sites it had 8+ million views. support the original

So far (ch55) this novel is really REALLY bad. theres nothing worth about it, mc is pathetic, side characters/world building are badly writen... i will read more and edit later

the novel is completed so this is my final goodbye to this masterpiec,

Addicting🎉🎉 When I first read it, I immediately got hooked up! Sad to see that it's now completed

Nc and deep story that you want to keep reading BUT as always our mc has no backbone and accepts to many things that he doesnt like. No one has respect for him or accept his opinions/decisions. If u want a mc that can stick to his opinion and decisions you will not like it.

This novel's amazing! I'm suprised that I've decided to give this novel a review, since for the first 25 chapters, I was convinced it was one of the worst novels I've ever read. Yes, it starts off TERRIBLY. But the author improves, and to be honest, it's REALLY good right now. All I ask is, author, PLEASE do not make this a harem. One of my FAVORITE things about this novel is the quippy, light-hearted yet emotional friendship the MC has with his male contemporaries (you know who I'm talking about, plot armor MC lol). It's very wholesome. DON'T make this about catching all the girls as they fawn over him. DON'T justify harems with "eAcH of tHe GiRlS hAvE tHeIR OwN pERsoNalIty!" Please. I love the pacing. If it continues at this pace, it will go on for quite a while, but I don't care. The pacing feels amazing. I got scared when at the end of volume 1 you said "From now on, the pacing will be quicker," because I loved the second half of volume 1. But volume 2 was also great, so props. Good job author!

I'm in chapter 183 right now, a pretty good novel in my opinion. But there is one drawback, the author makes a chapter full of unnecessary sentences. For example, in chapter 183 the scene of loot a treasure takes up a whole chapter. I will read a few more chapters, if the author has no changes. I thought, I will stop reading this novel. Thank you author, I hope your writing improves.

Loved the writing quality. The stability of updates was excellent, it seems the chapters haven't been uploaded for some days but you deserve it. You had worked hard to also upload two chapters a day so you earnestly deserve it. The story development is very smooth and exciting. All characters are lovable and detestable and are unique on their own way from each other which is a very important and good factor for a novel. World background is stable and smooth. I am loving it and I hope you drop a notice regarding your condition so we can relax. I don't know if it is the case but, if you want to drop it? I will accept it since it is your life and choice. I am sorry if I upset you in anyway in the review but, I was truthful. It deserves a 5 star because it made me constantly think about it all day and I could vision the image of what was written. Wishing for your good health @Entrail_JI

Story and writing is good just don’t buy privilege your wasting your money Buy a month of it to only get 3 weeks This time it’s fine because it was only 10 dollars max but paying the 20 dollars option to lost a quarter of what you buy is plain stupid Especially when after that "stockpile" period you still have to buy new privileges to get the updated chapter

Really good so far, but pls make the mc (Ren) more ruthless He almost died because of the explosion because he didnt kill the boy, than got experimented/tortured by the monolith for months, and when he finally comes back hoping for a warm welcome the union sold him out. With all this going on he has to want revenge or something, or else he would just be stupid for not wanting revenge or an masochists.

the good: writing ,the world building and main characters . the bad: the villain characters so far are barely explored some are quite shallow or have limited presense some are outright displayed op af and usually their sudden plan bare fruit instantly without any prior planing and setting the scene so it makes me feel like villains are op lucky and their power level is vague(this is only for main villains. the mobs usually get fu@#ed as planned) all in all villains are the negetive elements in this book and the cliffhangers can make a villains success more annoying . the ugly: it leaves you hanging too many times a the end of chapters its a plus if its a whole book but frustraiting if the chapter release is slow(which it is(though im not blaming the author he should take his time)) this book should be named The Chronilces of Cliffhangers (Against the Gods v2.0🤦‍♂️)

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This review is from reading to current chapters at the time. I say the book is intriguing it hooks you in and makes you want to read more. It can be said first 40 chapters have a lot of info about the world he is in now which is not bad since it builds up the world and how human side works. The grammar is great no issues and update stability is wonderful so no complaint. A issue would be for the mc since he is the author of that world I thought he would use his knowledge of the future to strengthen himself. He does use the knowledge from time to time but I just hoped he used it more especially since always mentions how he needs to get stronger in case plot changes. The second thing is the book has a romance tag but I just have not noticed any at all so that is confusing. Overall I recommend the book to all people.