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the good: writing ,the world building and main characters . the bad: the villain characters so far are barely explored some are quite shallow or have limited presense some are outright displayed op af and usually their sudden plan bare fruit instantly without any prior planing and setting the scene so it makes me feel like villains are op lucky and their power level is vague(this is only for main villains. the mobs usually get fu@#ed as planned) all in all villains are the negetive elements in this book and the cliffhangers can make a villains success more annoying . the ugly: it leaves you hanging too many times a the end of chapters its a plus if its a whole book but frustraiting if the chapter release is slow(which it is(though im not blaming the author he should take his time)) this book should be named The Chronilces of Cliffhangers (Against the Gods v2.0🤦‍♂️)

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though im saying this its quality is far above average webnovel here