Really good so far, but pls make the mc (Ren) more ruthless He almost died because of the explosion because he didnt kill the boy, than got experimented/tortured by the monolith for months, and when he finally comes back hoping for a warm welcome the union sold him out. With all this going on he has to want revenge or something, or else he would just be stupid for not wanting revenge or an masochists.
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