Review Detail of Macadamiahero in The Author's POV
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This review is from reading to current chapters at the time. I say the book is intriguing it hooks you in and makes you want to read more. It can be said first 40 chapters have a lot of info about the world he is in now which is not bad since it builds up the world and how human side works. The grammar is great no issues and update stability is wonderful so no complaint. A issue would be for the mc since he is the author of that world I thought he would use his knowledge of the future to strengthen himself. He does use the knowledge from time to time but I just hoped he used it more especially since always mentions how he needs to get stronger in case plot changes. The second thing is the book has a romance tag but I just have not noticed any at all so that is confusing. Overall I recommend the book to all people.
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Entrail_JI
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Thank you for your review. With regards to the cheat items. At the moment it is all about the timing. Will be talked more about later. With regards to romance. There will be romance. But later. I want to create a fluent romance that doesn't seem to be rushed. No damsel in distress type scenarios. No forced romance. I want proper character development. Maybe I should switch tag to late romance? I'm not sure, but it will happen around the middle stages of the novel. Right now my focus is on him adapting to the world. Anyhow, thank you for reading!
I have to ask will it only be one romance interest? Or like a harem? I don’t mind either one as long as it is well written.
Entrail_JI:Thank you for your review. With regards to the cheat items. At the moment it is all about the timing. Will be talked more about later. With regards to romance. There will be romance. But later. I want to create a fluent romance that doesn't seem to be rushed. No damsel in distress type scenarios. No forced romance. I want proper character development. Maybe I should switch tag to late romance? I'm not sure, but it will happen around the middle stages of the novel. Right now my focus is on him adapting to the world. Anyhow, thank you for reading!
At the moment I'm not too sure myself. If there will be a harem, then every character must have in-depth character development. Meaning that there will be no 2D love interest that fall in love for MC for no apparent reason. The reason romance is slow is mainly because of this reason. Basically, a harem will happen only if everyone likes them. Sort of like tales of demons and gods where the love interests are thoroughly well done and people crave for a harem rather than a single love interest.
Macadamiahero:I have to ask will it only be one romance interest? Or like a harem? I don’t mind either one as long as it is well written.
That is true I say if you do write a harem I would say make sure that the women all have diffrent personalities. Also to introduce them kinda early on so they do have character development.They don’t have to have feelings for mc right away. I kinda thought Amanda might be a love interest mainly just due to the whole prince saving fantasy she has.
Entrail_JI:At the moment I'm not too sure myself. If there will be a harem, then every character must have in-depth character development. Meaning that there will be no 2D love interest that fall in love for MC for no apparent reason. The reason romance is slow is mainly because of this reason. Basically, a harem will happen only if everyone likes them. Sort of like tales of demons and gods where the love interests are thoroughly well done and people crave for a harem rather than a single love interest.
Yup, that's the goal. Amanda has only a slight interest in him at the moment. Not yet to the point of love
Macadamiahero:That is true I say if you do write a harem I would say make sure that the women all have diffrent personalities. Also to introduce them kinda early on so they do have character development.They don’t have to have feelings for mc right away. I kinda thought Amanda might be a love interest mainly just due to the whole prince saving fantasy she has.