Arsene_Lionheart
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Arsene_Lionheart1yrPosted- Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented
you could use ".." for talk and '...' for thought
This paragraph has been deleted. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommentedAnastasia Romanoff Reference Art.
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why use his when he is talking to the person he is refering, you can use young master brothers ectt
"Young master doesn't need to be educated. I'm just doing what I have to do. By the way, the young master should hurry up, his older brothers, as well as all family members who hold important positions, have arrived at the salon..." - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommentedEven though the young Makai had just turned 15, his body was well defined and clearly delineated muscles as a result of a lot of physical training. With his height of 1.78 meters, anyone could misjudge his age if it weren't for his youthful face that looked quite handsome with his long black hair.
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not your Memory but "the Memory"
This young man in your memoir is called Makai Collins, the youngest son of Crimson Duke Marvin Collins who was given the title of Hereditary Duke by the king himself after he made great conquests in the War of Kings. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented
mc caractere is being forced
Seeing this, I also felt good that nothing wrong would come out of my mouth. But I was feeling bad too, maybe because it was the first time in such a situation in which someone hates you, and He doesn't even try to hide it. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented
you could use this type of writing style, it better
Just as Andrew's sword was about to touch Roy's chest, Roy slammed his kick on Andrew's chest. Roy's strike was so fast that Andrew did not even get a chance to escape the blow. And Andrew, being dragged down on the ground, fell backward. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented
not understand it treat
Harrison was sitting in front of me in the carriage; he told me to consider Reinhardt not too low but low, which I was not surprised to see. Holt was Marquess, so how can they understand a Baron as their equal even if they will tie the relationship with them. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented
is he his only son than it is his hier but if not presices pls
Reinhardt is one of the barons of the Kingdom and Holt, Marquis. So why would Holt go on to have a relationship with one of his great heirs to a baron? - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommentedThe girl has golden blond hair, blue eyes which look like a jewel embedded in them, and a gorgeous face like a fairy coming from heaven. She was nodding at the talk of that man.
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why is he being puss*
I started going forward. Ben bowed his head as he saw me going. I didn't like seeing it. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented
not would but will
I am still dreaming of how stupid I am; I could not understand such a thing. I have to get up early. If I slept any longer, I would really be late to leave. - Arsene_Lionheart1yrCommented"Roy Holt, The Villain"
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you could use it for gaining expérience ectt..
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i just don't like how adveturer guild is Accentuate it like it the only think that exist normaly adventure job is the lower job that exist, for god shake he is a prince even some low noble would not lower themself from being adventurer
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